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Array ( [sid] => 55728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Darkening [time] => 2004-07-11 14:40:10 [hometext] => this was written randomly in my maths class, but its still an ok poem, comment plz! [bodytext] => 20 hells in my mind,
searching for my god inside,
killing faith from within,
replacing it with my evil sin.

Sixes of burned flesh,
Seeping of distress,
black empty round orbs,
Shining with they're call.

Black hearts darkened whole,
breaking all the rules that are told,
hells angels sweep and fill,
all of which they are to kill.

Making both worlds aware,
Of the inside scare,
forests deeply running deers,
playing on present fears.

Flames final burn strike,
quick and infinate like light,
memories forever imprinted on the brainm,
matters not of what we shame.

Minds blood bath of all emotional mess,
no sign of a new regress,
changes apparent, forever gone,
never there to give up on.

Wherever pain appears,
salvation shall be near,
eternal cycle of rebirth,
imitating art, imitating life.

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The Darkening

Contributed by Ryoko on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:40:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

20 hells in my mind,
searching for my god inside,
killing faith from within,
replacing it with my evil sin.

Sixes of burned flesh,
Seeping of distress,
black empty round orbs,
Shining with they're call.

Black hearts darkened whole,
breaking all the rules that are told,
hells angels sweep and fill,
all of which they are to kill.

Making both worlds aware,
Of the inside scare,
forests deeply running deers,
playing on present fears.

Flames final burn strike,
quick and infinate like light,
memories forever imprinted on the brainm,
matters not of what we shame.

Minds blood bath of all emotional mess,
no sign of a new regress,
changes apparent, forever gone,
never there to give up on.

Wherever pain appears,
salvation shall be near,
eternal cycle of rebirth,
imitating art, imitating life.

Copyright © Ryoko ... [ 2004-07-11 14:40:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Darkening (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:44:13 PM AEST
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WOW what the hell? how u get so good i mean WOW im lost for words. i love the ending best!god this is so amazing...crazy but amazing. u gotta write more, jelous again. WOW

Re: The Darkening (User Rating: 1 )
by mdmorash on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:05:45 PM AEST
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Good verses, cool visuals, all in all...brilliantly done.

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