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Array ( [sid] => 55693 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY DADDY 4-LIFE [time] => 2004-07-11 05:37:58 [hometext] => IN MEMORY OF RAUL GARFIELD CURIEL MARCH 31, 1962 - NOVEMBER 30, 2003 SAN JOSE, CA [bodytext] => WHO DECIDES WHEN ITS YOUR TIME TO GO
WERE LEFT IN THE DARK FORBIDDEN TO KNOW
SO MANY THINGS LEFT UNSAID LEFT UNDONE
JUST WHEN IT SEEMED HIS LIFE HAD BEGUN
BUT STILL I HAVE FAITHE STILL I BELIEVE
FINALLY JUSTICE WE LL SOMEDAY RECIEVE
THEYLL BE NO LONGER SADNESS NO LIES AND NO PAIN
THE TEARS WILL DISAPPEAR AND TURN INTO RAIN
THE LIFE HE WAS GIVEN THE CARDS HE WAS DEALT
SOMEDAY I WILL HEAL BUT NEVER THE PAIN I HAVE FELT
I HAVE A RIGHT TO BE ANGRY BUT STILL HAVE NO GRUDGE
ITS NOT UP TO ME FOR ONLY THEY GOD CAN JUDGE
TO HEAR HIS NAME AS A VICTIM STILL MAKES ME SAD
HE WAS SOMEBODYS WORLD AND HE WAS ALSO MY DAD

YOUR DAUGHTER 4-LIFE [comments] => 2 [counter] => 324 [topic] => 32 [informant] => REFLECTIONBYMARY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

MY DADDY 4-LIFE

Contributed by REFLECTIONBYMARY on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:37:58 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

WHO DECIDES WHEN ITS YOUR TIME TO GO
WERE LEFT IN THE DARK FORBIDDEN TO KNOW
SO MANY THINGS LEFT UNSAID LEFT UNDONE
JUST WHEN IT SEEMED HIS LIFE HAD BEGUN
BUT STILL I HAVE FAITHE STILL I BELIEVE
FINALLY JUSTICE WE LL SOMEDAY RECIEVE
THEYLL BE NO LONGER SADNESS NO LIES AND NO PAIN
THE TEARS WILL DISAPPEAR AND TURN INTO RAIN
THE LIFE HE WAS GIVEN THE CARDS HE WAS DEALT
SOMEDAY I WILL HEAL BUT NEVER THE PAIN I HAVE FELT
I HAVE A RIGHT TO BE ANGRY BUT STILL HAVE NO GRUDGE
ITS NOT UP TO ME FOR ONLY THEY GOD CAN JUDGE
TO HEAR HIS NAME AS A VICTIM STILL MAKES ME SAD
HE WAS SOMEBODYS WORLD AND HE WAS ALSO MY DAD

YOUR DAUGHTER 4-LIFE

Copyright © REFLECTIONBYMARY ... [ 2004-07-11 05:37:58]
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Re: MY DADDY 4-LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:45:02 AM AEST
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That was an awesome poem. I know it is hard living with out the loved ones you miss.
Times of healing will come and you will have good memories of him to make you smile.

Re: MY DADDY 4-LIFE (User Rating: 1 )
by mlcarter369 on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:54:43 PM AEST
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loosing some one you love is always hard i like the way u express ur feelings

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