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Array ( [sid] => 55286 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing Gets Clearer [time] => 2004-07-08 09:50:34 [hometext] => Hopefully this will end my writer's block. If it's not good tell me, so that I know that my block is still up. Comments appreciated. [bodytext] => Irony and tragedy are locked inside
The same mirror
You try to sort out your issues but
Nothing gets clearer

And so you wait for the chance
The most oppotune time
To end this sh*t, this so-called life

Now off you go! Into this hell
This existence you can't do too well
And so ou burn, weeping for your lost life
Then you smile, raise your head, grab the knife
Death is better

I used to think that all you need was
Love and a good feeling
But when love is lost, there's no more worth
To continue on living

Now I'm broken down
The sun went out
On my so-called life, my hated life

Now off I plunge! Into this hell
This existence I can't do too well
And so I burn, tearing at my bleeding mind
Then I smile, start to laugh, leave this life behind
Death is better

I'm not so naive, so now I see
Love is forfeit
Well no one cares, so why should I?
I'll end my life,
I'll end my hell!

Now off I go! Yeah, what the hell?
I can't even live too well
I want to burn, tearing out my broken heart
Then I smile, raise the gun
It's been awhile since I've had some fun...
Death is better [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 34 [informant] => TheLastStringCut [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Nothing Gets Clearer

Contributed by TheLastStringCut on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:50:34 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Irony and tragedy are locked inside
The same mirror
You try to sort out your issues but
Nothing gets clearer

And so you wait for the chance
The most oppotune time
To end this sh*t, this so-called life

Now off you go! Into this hell
This existence you can't do too well
And so ou burn, weeping for your lost life
Then you smile, raise your head, grab the knife
Death is better

I used to think that all you need was
Love and a good feeling
But when love is lost, there's no more worth
To continue on living

Now I'm broken down
The sun went out
On my so-called life, my hated life

Now off I plunge! Into this hell
This existence I can't do too well
And so I burn, tearing at my bleeding mind
Then I smile, start to laugh, leave this life behind
Death is better

I'm not so naive, so now I see
Love is forfeit
Well no one cares, so why should I?
I'll end my life,
I'll end my hell!

Now off I go! Yeah, what the hell?
I can't even live too well
I want to burn, tearing out my broken heart
Then I smile, raise the gun
It's been awhile since I've had some fun...
Death is better




Copyright © TheLastStringCut ... [ 2004-07-08 09:50:34]
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Re: Nothing Gets Clearer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:39:44 AM AEST
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I'd say that I don't see a block there... This was good.... keep them coming...
Jenni


Re: Nothing Gets Clearer (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 01:49:25 PM AEST
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*cries* jeff this is sad i... I LOVE YOU!!! please dont be sad.. *holds you close* i miss you lots and lots you mean everything to me.. this is a really good write that just sad *sighs* LOVE YOU JEFF!!! .... love your ami jo




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