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Array ( [sid] => 55282 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => untitled [time] => 2004-07-08 08:40:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i sit here alone in this room with just a glimpse of rainy, gloomy light
peeking through the glass window as i take in every word that bouncing off
the walls in another part of this hell hole. I hear them scream and squeal
and i just want to cry. when the noise breaks and silence enters in, my heart
stops pumping, my breathing subsides. I wait for the day where i get my
turn. when i can look back and laugh in his face knowing he has lost everything
good and beautiful in his life and then he will know what it's like to have
nothing My heart is numb, can't feel no one. No happiness or pain and
i have nothing to gain but life itself. Underneath my breath i whisper
to myself everything i dream and desire. No one knows or understands what
my deepest thoughts are. I sit here in solitude for no one knows me truly. After
he walked out and left me hangin on a breakable thread I trust no one that deeply.
For my own flesh left me abandoned with a bleeding heart in my trembling hand. How could this be?
Where do i turn? My life feels as if it has run out. Run out of hope, run out of breath.
Can I revive myself now? Is it possible that I could be brought out? Who can show me?
Who can heal this pain? Who can fill this hole that constantly brings me to my knees?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 65 [informant] => drummerchic18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
untitled

Contributed by drummerchic18 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:40:59 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



i sit here alone in this room with just a glimpse of rainy, gloomy light
peeking through the glass window as i take in every word that bouncing off
the walls in another part of this hell hole. I hear them scream and squeal
and i just want to cry. when the noise breaks and silence enters in, my heart
stops pumping, my breathing subsides. I wait for the day where i get my
turn. when i can look back and laugh in his face knowing he has lost everything
good and beautiful in his life and then he will know what it's like to have
nothing My heart is numb, can't feel no one. No happiness or pain and
i have nothing to gain but life itself. Underneath my breath i whisper
to myself everything i dream and desire. No one knows or understands what
my deepest thoughts are. I sit here in solitude for no one knows me truly. After
he walked out and left me hangin on a breakable thread I trust no one that deeply.
For my own flesh left me abandoned with a bleeding heart in my trembling hand. How could this be?
Where do i turn? My life feels as if it has run out. Run out of hope, run out of breath.
Can I revive myself now? Is it possible that I could be brought out? Who can show me?
Who can heal this pain? Who can fill this hole that constantly brings me to my knees?




Copyright © drummerchic18 ... [ 2004-07-08 08:40:59]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 01:13:20 AM AEST
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Oh sweeet girl,
Ths is very sad but I can relate many times over.
Hang tuff for true luv will find u.
Great writing.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by clowns_can_burn on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:06:45 AM AEST
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great write




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