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Good Morning, Me!!
Contributed by
frohemiasweetie
on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:20:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Dont run with the sun all on your shoulders and all
When the darkness all folded all down and all
And all is well and the smell is swelling sweet
In my nostrils
And ears intercept birds telling me
Good morning me
And do you see even the willows drying their tears
On the yellow checkered apron of mother nature
And they are willing to try again and straighten
And say the glass is half full
So I cant help but oblige to
Kiss the air smack in the mouth
And say
Outside I love you
Because you
Put on your best dress or pants suit
And decided to greet me once again
Ever more plentiful
Making my eyes water
Over full with grateful
From your humblest daughter
Copyright ©
frohemiasweetie
... [
2004-07-07 18:20:21]
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Re: Good Morning, Me!!
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 06:32:24 PM AEST
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I'm gonna be honest. It was good but it wasn't great. Then again it's not really a style of writing i admire. You used "all" to much in the beginning but you did a nice job!
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