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Array ( [sid] => 55187 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One moment [time] => 2004-07-07 15:05:46 [hometext] => It's not the best poem, but it's how I felt when I wrote it. [bodytext] =>

For just one moment
Everything goes away
For just one moment
Nothing matters
For just one moment
I dont care if Im perfect
For just one moment
I dont feel a thing
For just one moment
I give up on everything
For just one moment
I'm completely numb
For just one moment
I love myself


The numbness comes into play
Everything else goes away
One moment when nothing matters
This moment is such a rush
I never want it to go away
I'm crying out for something better
I want this feeling to last forever [comments] => 6 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => despised_freak [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
One moment

Contributed by despised_freak on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:05:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry





For just one moment
Everything goes away
For just one moment
Nothing matters
For just one moment
I dont care if Im perfect
For just one moment
I dont feel a thing
For just one moment
I give up on everything
For just one moment
I'm completely numb
For just one moment
I love myself


The numbness comes into play
Everything else goes away
One moment when nothing matters
This moment is such a rush
I never want it to go away
I'm crying out for something better
I want this feeling to last forever




Copyright © despised_freak ... [ 2004-07-07 15:05:46]
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Re: One moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:11:48 PM AEST
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Don't we all want that moment and feeling to last forever...??? Most of us do...this is a great poem...keep expressing yourself!

please comment on my work too
Summer


Re: One moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:17:17 PM AEST
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excellent write. summer's right. one moment can change everything. people try so hard for one thing such as happiness or whatever, and its gone instantly.


Re: One moment (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:28:08 PM AEST
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Great write, keep on striving for something better!


Re: One moment (User Rating: 1 )
by WestCPunk on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:05:13 PM AEST
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That was some good writing i get like that sometimes only when i'm upset or something but ya lol
Shelbi


Re: One moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:55:13 PM AEST
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Feelings well depicted..... Good work..
Jenni


Re: One moment (User Rating: 1 )
by despised_freak on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:09:59 PM AEST
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Thanks. :)




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