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Array ( [sid] => 55136 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Placement of Passion [time] => 2004-07-07 08:18:19 [hometext] => ~*Kinda wanted this to turn out to be more subtle than it is. What is it you love about your sweetie? Place your passion wisely.*~ [bodytext] => Love the rain for the sprightly smile it brings benignly to your face
---Not solely or simply for the way the droplets dance upon the drum of your chest

Love ALL of the droplets that drip delightfully downward
---Not only those that happen to gently graze or gracefully glimmer upon your skin

Love the thunder for the prowess it possesses
---Not purely for the palpable pulsation that pierces your heart

Love the lightning for its fleeting, fiery, quickly quipping quirks
---Not merely for no more than its glitzy glamour and goldenrod guise

Love the wind for the way it wittingly whisks its whimsical whispers across your wits
---Not well for the warmly welcomed and wonderful weakness it wrings on oneself

Love the hail for the harmonious heartbeat that hammers happily, hardly holding back
---Not totally for the trifling tender tree-branch that splinters swiftly at one sheer stroke

Love the puddle for the cool, calm collection of crystalline conviction and consideration of its core
---Not completely for the cold, comforting caress or cuddle that comes quietly with coyness

Love the clouds for impending innocent ardor of their acquired abundance of adoration
---Not entirely for the way that they sometimes seem ethereal airy or exquisite

Love the real and radiant rarity of the rainbow
---Not simply the simpering superficiality and smoldering sensation of the storm

For the rainbow reigns over the realm of reality long after the rage of the roaring rainstorm retreats
---And isn’t the rainbow that which we wish would weather and withstand the world’s worrisome ways?

Yes, love the rainbow and savor the simple sweetness of its sun kissed serenity
---For the rainbow is a rare and reluctant reward that is revealed only by those ready for and worthy of reception




Special thanks to those who helped me in the forums
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Placement of Passion

Contributed by liquidsunshine on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:18:19 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Love the rain for the sprightly smile it brings benignly to your face
---Not solely or simply for the way the droplets dance upon the drum of your chest

Love ALL of the droplets that drip delightfully downward
---Not only those that happen to gently graze or gracefully glimmer upon your skin

Love the thunder for the prowess it possesses
---Not purely for the palpable pulsation that pierces your heart

Love the lightning for its fleeting, fiery, quickly quipping quirks
---Not merely for no more than its glitzy glamour and goldenrod guise

Love the wind for the way it wittingly whisks its whimsical whispers across your wits
---Not well for the warmly welcomed and wonderful weakness it wrings on oneself

Love the hail for the harmonious heartbeat that hammers happily, hardly holding back
---Not totally for the trifling tender tree-branch that splinters swiftly at one sheer stroke

Love the puddle for the cool, calm collection of crystalline conviction and consideration of its core
---Not completely for the cold, comforting caress or cuddle that comes quietly with coyness

Love the clouds for impending innocent ardor of their acquired abundance of adoration
---Not entirely for the way that they sometimes seem ethereal airy or exquisite

Love the real and radiant rarity of the rainbow
---Not simply the simpering superficiality and smoldering sensation of the storm

For the rainbow reigns over the realm of reality long after the rage of the roaring rainstorm retreats
---And isn’t the rainbow that which we wish would weather and withstand the world’s worrisome ways?

Yes, love the rainbow and savor the simple sweetness of its sun kissed serenity
---For the rainbow is a rare and reluctant reward that is revealed only by those ready for and worthy of reception




Special thanks to those who helped me in the forums




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Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:20:57 AM AEST
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nice use of repitition, and isn't love a gale!

Nice job.


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 08:21:29 AM AEST
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nice alliteration


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 05:37:08 PM AEST
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Do I smell a bit of alliteration in here somewhere...?
Nice job! This was really very artistic, and well-said. Bravo!
Andrew


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by lifefliesby on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:26:27 AM AEST
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awsome poem
great repitition and alliteration
It's great, keep it up babe

~Jared J.~


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:35:01 AM AEST
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Beautiful words to describe your love of God's joyous downpours. I really enjoyed this. The rainbows and the smell after the rain...the wetness of the grass on bare feet. Ah, you have brought it all back to me.
Stitch


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by dragonlover on Thursday, 26th August 2004 @ 03:43:43 PM AEST
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very well written.


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Wednesday, 13th October 2004 @ 05:03:07 PM AEST
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Alliterations were marvelous, as was this piece. But, that's to be expected by now. Wonderful, my friend,
~Carrie~


Re: Placement of Passion (User Rating: 1 )
by Hydrobipo on Friday, 9th December 2011 @ 10:24:17 PM AEST
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great poem, very good work




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