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Wake me up from my slumber,
Show me the essence of beauty
And the scent of summer.
Capture all the butterflies
That dance around my stomach.
Set them free into the night
So they can charm the right.
Caress my soul in the gleam you hold
Settle me down to peace and wonder.
Breathe into me the exquisiteness you possess,
Make me the Goddess of the summer,
And of the nights.
Lay my insecurities down to rest
And drench me with your sight,
Enhance me with optimistic views,
That will never cease to decease
And cast a spell upon me
Of happiness and bliss.
Sprinkle gems of love
Upon my awaiting body
Let diamonds dance upon my cheeks
And hear the music my heart plays softly.

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Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Shine life into me,
Wake me up from my slumber,
Show me the essence of beauty
And the scent of summer.
Capture all the butterflies
That dance around my stomach.
Set them free into the night
So they can charm the right.
Caress my soul in the gleam you hold
Settle me down to peace and wonder.
Breathe into me the exquisiteness you possess,
Make me the Goddess of the summer,
And of the nights.
Lay my insecurities down to rest
And drench me with your sight,
Enhance me with optimistic views,
That will never cease to decease
And cast a spell upon me
Of happiness and bliss.
Sprinkle gems of love
Upon my awaiting body
Let diamonds dance upon my cheeks
And hear the music my heart plays softly.

Copyright © xxbreathlessx ... [ 2004-07-06 12:55:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Read it... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 12:56:42 PM AEST
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very beautiful write,

pixie xx

Re: Read it... (User Rating: 1 )
by Gentledove on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:09:09 PM AEST
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A very nice write.
Gentledove

Re: Read it... (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:31:15 PM AEST
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A sweet Summers dance.

Re: Read it... (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:52:38 PM AEST
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charming and uplifting id say you have someone in you life that makes you truely happy not something i can say myself
great write

Allways Sincere
Leana

Re: Read it... (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 03:53:54 PM AEST
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charming and uplifting id say you have someone in you life that makes you truely happy not something i *cannot* say myself
great write

Allways Sincere
Leana

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