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Array ( [sid] => 54788 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Thinking of you [time] => 2004-07-04 22:24:22 [hometext] => I wrote this sometime last year. I remember writing this poem...sitting at work and suddenly it all came pouring out of me. To some extent I still mean every single word... [bodytext] =>

I’ve been sitting here smiling, being nice to everyone
And all of a sudden I’m sour
I’m thinking of you.

I’ve had a day like all the others, nothing bad, nothing good
And now I feel like crying
‘Cause you’ve filtered through.

I thought I was over that, letting the crap crawl in
But somehow it all relates
It relates back to you.

Forgotten the anger that was hidden, I stop smiling when I think of you
And what right have you to smile
When your little girl is bleeding?

Don’t understand how you live with yourself, are there no mirrors
To show you the truth?
Or are you blinded by the fear of seeing?

Don’t be surprised, by all this hate you see
You should know it –
You put it here.

And don’t ever come back, down on your knees
With puppy dog eyes
Whispering please….

MW 08.08.03 [comments] => 7 [counter] => 292 [topic] => 6 [informant] => evilfairy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Thinking of you

Contributed by evilfairy on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:24:22 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I’ve been sitting here smiling, being nice to everyone
And all of a sudden I’m sour
I’m thinking of you.

I’ve had a day like all the others, nothing bad, nothing good
And now I feel like crying
‘Cause you’ve filtered through.

I thought I was over that, letting the crap crawl in
But somehow it all relates
It relates back to you.

Forgotten the anger that was hidden, I stop smiling when I think of you
And what right have you to smile
When your little girl is bleeding?

Don’t understand how you live with yourself, are there no mirrors
To show you the truth?
Or are you blinded by the fear of seeing?

Don’t be surprised, by all this hate you see
You should know it –
You put it here.

And don’t ever come back, down on your knees
With puppy dog eyes
Whispering please….

MW 08.08.03

Copyright Â© evilfairy ... [ 2004-07-04 22:24:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:34:10 PM AEST
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what a powerful poem of emotions and feelings, beautifully expressed:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:38:11 PM AEST
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wow thats good writing, i like your choice of words, awesome job

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:43:39 PM AEST
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Very strong write. Good choice of words.

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 10:53:03 PM AEST
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To the point and very honest...
Stay strong :)

LW

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:27:31 PM AEST
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Strong words, great poem.

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 11:59:28 PM AEST
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moddy, emotional, powerful, yeah, I'd say I like this, but I;d be lieing. I love this, you've done it again evil.

Re: Thinking of you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:53:38 AM AEST
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wow, this is great, very strong and hard hitting words,

pixie xx

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