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Wishing each morning I could die,
Hoping tomorrow I wish and pray,
For an angel to come carry me away,
I will miss your touch and your smile,
But having me gone will be worthwhile,
I will miss ur heartbeat and your love,
It Breaks my heart 2 know im not enough,
Sorry to cause you all this stress,
To turn your life into a mess,
Hoping me u can forgive,
Will give me the power to live,
Cause I cant live another day,
If I wake and your gone away,
So this is incase I should die,
I Wanna say sorry and goodbye

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my goodbye

Contributed by lil_angel_eyes on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Holiday Poetry

Watching every day pass by,
Wishing each morning I could die,
Hoping tomorrow I wish and pray,
For an angel to come carry me away,
I will miss your touch and your smile,
But having me gone will be worthwhile,
I will miss ur heartbeat and your love,
It Breaks my heart 2 know im not enough,
Sorry to cause you all this stress,
To turn your life into a mess,
Hoping me u can forgive,
Will give me the power to live,
Cause I cant live another day,
If I wake and your gone away,
So this is incase I should die,
I Wanna say sorry and goodbye

Copyright © lil_angel_eyes ... [ 2002-10-23 10:45:00]
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Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 10:48:53 AM AEST
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nice write, hope you don't feel that way though

Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 12:43:37 PM AEST
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Wow! this is sad! I hope things get better!
Christina

Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 01:06:07 PM AEST
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Have you read "Just In Case"??? It goes along with your last two lines...

I really hope that you don't wake up every morning hoping to die, because if you do that then you miss the beauty of the sunrise... I won't say that everything gets better in time (because that would be a cliche and everyone knows how much I hate to get, and leave, cliches...)

Hun, really you would be enough for anyone. You just have to realize that to yourself first, and then everyone else will follow... self confidence is a must!!!

I can feel the agony in this... and the heart aches...

Ginnie...

Re: my goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 28th October 2002 @ 06:45:51 AM AEST
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Very touching write...Your pain is vivid in your words. Very well done! Larry

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