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[title] => effete'
[time] => 2004-07-02 14:34:48
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your smile will ever be lighting up the skies
like it did on earth whilst you were here
you were the reason i was waiting all those years
i was the reason you waited too, you said so
my best ever beau, just thought i'd let you know
of you darling, i shall never let go
it is dark, dark, dark without you
it's hard to beat the best, found out all the rest
other men have only left me stressed
we will forever have this sensitive connection
our marriage lives in the midnight eternal sun
where are the answers; i have none
lost and alone; i wondered why, the one i loved
had to die; people say time can ease the pain
they were wrong; this ache for you remains
now i am estranged, a woman who belongs nowhere
hours are few that i rest, far betwix, few and fleet
life's paths all taken by my feet
all my steps turn back to you, you know its true
sometimes i feel too lost in the eerie silence
of my mind; eternal love,
covers all existence in time
§* *§
*|*
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effete'
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:34:48 PM in AEST
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your smile will ever be lighting up the skies
like it did on earth whilst you were here
you were the reason i was waiting all those years
i was the reason you waited too, you said so
my best ever beau, just thought i'd let you know
of you darling, i shall never let go
it is dark, dark, dark without you
it's hard to beat the best, found out all the rest
other men have only left me stressed
we will forever have this sensitive connection
our marriage lives in the midnight eternal sun
where are the answers; i have none
lost and alone; i wondered why, the one i loved
had to die; people say time can ease the pain
they were wrong; this ache for you remains
now i am estranged, a woman who belongs nowhere
hours are few that i rest, far betwix, few and fleet
life's paths all taken by my feet
all my steps turn back to you, you know its true
sometimes i feel too lost in the eerie silence
of my mind; eternal love,
covers all existence in time
§* *§
*|*
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ladyfawn
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Re: effete'
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 03:48:07 PM AEST
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| amazing |
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Re: effete'
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by venkat on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 12:57:09 AM AEST
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| dark but very nice.. hugs :-) venkat |
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:31:19 AM AEST
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| Beautiful, like all your writes. :) |
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 04:54:03 AM AEST
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Simply fantastic
I cried reading this the love you feel is immense and it touched my heart so much.
The mist does clear and time moves on but memories never fade.
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxx |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:34:36 AM AEST
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I don't believe that time heals the pain or helps the loss. A broken heart that is shattered cannot be mended. The loss is always there with you. Just be strong Nessa until you are together again.
Love,
Rita |
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by pixie on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 11:54:52 AM AEST
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wow, this is so powerful and beautiful
pixie xx |
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 01:03:56 PM AEST
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breathtakingly beautiful, eternal love a great thought to meditate on.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: effete'
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by Merry on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 09:32:18 AM AEST
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Your love is surely a special bond that will prevail through eterenity - I am sad that you feel so sad and bereft, and I know there are no words that offer comfort, but know you are loved and appreciated by many.
hugs sis
merry |
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Re: effete'
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by reilt on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 02:46:22 PM AEST
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| a wonderful poem. you are very very talented. thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. |
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 05:17:03 PM AEST
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Nessa,
If I could turn back the pages of time, Oh' sweetie I would for you, Your bleeding within honey, no-one will ever be able to replace the one you loved, He watches over you , and within you and your children he lives, take care Hugs, Val |
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by bernard on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 02:12:24 AM AEST
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What a sad poem, delicately written beautiful wording, You have great talent 5/5 for this work.
bernard. |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:42:38 AM AEST
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Nessa, you have been breaking my heart with your recent writes. The beauty in the way you express such soul sadness is astounding. Though we havent talked much of late, know that I keep you in my prayers and thoughts.
Roses my friend
Larry |
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:03:21 PM AEST
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Oh, Nessa.... This is achingly beautiful.
it is dark, dark, dark without you
The repetition in this line is.... gosh... so powerfully emotive. The entire piece is especially moving but this particular line absolutely struck me.
With hugs and love,
SNM |
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by arden on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 08:55:36 PM AEST
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:( ..... this is so sad.
pure raw emotion shown in this. so beautiful so touching. greatly done nessa.
Arden |
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 07:26:54 AM AEST
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Oh Nessa. This brought tears to my eyes.
So, so sad.
But oh so beautiful too.
"lost and alone; i wondered why, the one i loved
had to die; people say time can ease the pain
they were wrong; this ache for you remains"
Time does not ease pain. I know it doesnt.
Beautiful poem.
*hugs lots*
Phil xxx
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 03:39:15 PM AEST
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Awww Ness....This is terribly heartbreaking..but so powerfully and emotionally well written...
I know the loss you feel will always be a lasting one....but you are strong....
Love you..
Jenni |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:38:41 PM AEST
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| How touching and heart wrenching. I feel so much emotion here, lovely lovely write. |
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by Archie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:16:47 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome tribute to the friendship and love you have for your late husband. I hope your heart continues to heal and that true love will come again some day. |
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:34:55 AM AEST
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| wo: indepth poem.. a lot of feeling there.. great expression .. |
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:33:45 PM AEST
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Oh dear sweet nessa,
He never left u only the phycical touch is gone.
This is truthfully sad but written beautifully.
keep up the awesome writing.
luv u girlfriend,
emy
U r always in my prayers. |
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 03:31:27 AM AEST
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So sad, but so beautiful... This one really gets to me...
Hugs and strenght,
Hur |
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:06:43 PM AEST
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| His memory lives on inside of you Nessa. Keep him in your heart always. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 02:01:56 PM AEST
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| Nessa, this write is so sad. It's such a touching, heartfelt write. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:07:10 PM AEST
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| beautiful. powerful. emotional. well written. heart wrenching. captivating. full of meaning. well thought rhymes. great rhythm. shall i go on nessa? =] |
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:04:28 AM AEST
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This is so sad but it is really beautiful. I am sorry.
Spazzo |
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by colinb on
Tuesday, 29th July 2014 @ 02:29:10 AM AEST
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| very emotional |
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