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Array ( [sid] => 54528 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Hell [time] => 2004-07-02 13:42:30 [hometext] => ~sometimes it takes death to change your life~ [bodytext] => In Hell

i am a young child
10 years old today
i was never baptized
i wasnt allowed to pray

so it was that i died
cancer inside my mind
there was no one at my bed side
here i rest,here i die

i flew thru a tunnel
a bright light i did see
happiness caressed me
and god i did see

he looked deep within me
and said child your not saved
can i still stay with you jesus?
he said not today

so i was banished from heaven
onward to hell
sit next to satan
and his pitchfork tail

burning and screaming
demons gnashing of teeth
twisting bones above my head
lava below my feet

is this justifiable?
a childs soul demise
many are like me
a thousands childrens cries

i curse the name of god
life is so unfair
death isnt any better
trust me ive been there

suffering forever in hell
eternity it does seem
i awaken in my bed
thank god,it was just a dream [comments] => 8 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Vermillion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
In Hell

Contributed by Vermillion on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



In Hell

i am a young child
10 years old today
i was never baptized
i wasnt allowed to pray

so it was that i died
cancer inside my mind
there was no one at my bed side
here i rest,here i die

i flew thru a tunnel
a bright light i did see
happiness caressed me
and god i did see

he looked deep within me
and said child your not saved
can i still stay with you jesus?
he said not today

so i was banished from heaven
onward to hell
sit next to satan
and his pitchfork tail

burning and screaming
demons gnashing of teeth
twisting bones above my head
lava below my feet

is this justifiable?
a childs soul demise
many are like me
a thousands childrens cries

i curse the name of god
life is so unfair
death isnt any better
trust me ive been there

suffering forever in hell
eternity it does seem
i awaken in my bed
thank god,it was just a dream




Copyright © Vermillion ... [ 2004-07-02 13:42:30]
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Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:43:39 PM AEST
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I am astounded. this is amazing

pixie xx


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:30:22 PM AEST
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i missed you so much!! Been craving a little demented philosophy. soooo good

Always,
Vanessa ( 090404 )


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 02:31:14 PM AEST
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amazing and touching write.. very nice job...like always.. after i read your work i have to sit here for a moment and take a breath and think bout what i just read cuz its all so powerful.. everything you say jut hits me and it takes a moment to let it all soak in..your work is amazing.. AMI JO


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by dreaded_Axe_of_gore on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 04:39:17 PM AEST
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Wow, Im at a loss for words here


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 04:32:04 PM AEST
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u've dun it again. great poem. great twist. great everything about the poem. keep it up
~allyson~


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:21:47 AM AEST
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Damn, that hits like a snipers bullet well written


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 07:00:41 PM AEST
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another great piece.. although i dont think ive read any of your work that wasnt.. nice job..and yes thank god it was just a dream.. take care.. AMI JO


Re: In Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 08:12:59 PM AEST
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wow, yeah, i really hope it is not the case that that is so, because a lot of really great people must be down in hell if it is.




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