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Array ( [sid] => 54517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => someone... [time] => 2004-07-02 12:27:59 [hometext] => im so sowwy..... [bodytext] => someone is hurting
and its all because of me
my immature nature
my silly little games
have driven someone to death
to kill yourself is just unbelievable
but to kill a life of not your own blood
inocience...
is just..a...sin...
its not like i knew
but its the fact that i do
thats making me think
that i should blink
and dust my eyes
from the life i thought i lived
sweet little thing
honest o so natural
seems to be the complete opposite
it does
i dont need nobody else to comfort me
though i thought it would help
all its really doing
is making me feel worse...
if thats possible
i would like to die
though i know that wouldnt help
someone would be in that special place
a life for a life
would only get me so far into hell
so i say it now and i believe its true
think of your actions before 'they' do [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Hannah_Heaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

someone...

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:27:59 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

someone is hurting
and its all because of me
my immature nature
my silly little games
have driven someone to death
to kill yourself is just unbelievable
but to kill a life of not your own blood
inocience...
is just..a...sin...
its not like i knew
but its the fact that i do
thats making me think
that i should blink
and dust my eyes
from the life i thought i lived
sweet little thing
honest o so natural
seems to be the complete opposite
it does
i dont need nobody else to comfort me
though i thought it would help
all its really doing
is making me feel worse...
if thats possible
i would like to die
though i know that wouldnt help
someone would be in that special place
a life for a life
would only get me so far into hell
so i say it now and i believe its true
think of your actions before 'they' do

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-07-02 12:27:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:36:07 PM AEST
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very good write,

pixie xx

Re: someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by Hannah_Heaven on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 12:40:12 PM AEST
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thanks to everyone who read my poems even if it was like years ago...:P
sowwy for not replying i was sort of lost in everything and forgot x
o well:D
bye xxxxxxxx han

Re: someone... (User Rating: 1 )
by hooray_its_jen on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 01:24:48 PM AEST
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Very nice poem! Wow, you're a good writer. I enjoy reading your work and it is always some of the best that's out there.

Blessings
Love, Jenna

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