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Array ( [sid] => 5444 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I offer [time] => 2002-10-22 21:45:00 [hometext] => for someone special [bodytext] => Walking with my darling, in the moonlight by the sea,

Every man in the world, was wishing he was me.

The rolling sound of waves, the wind blowing in your hair,

When I’m with you darling, I haven’t got a care.

Your beauty is just ravishing, your smile is so intense,

When I look into your eyes, the world starts making sense.

When you put your body, up tightly close to mine,

We wrap each other up tight, our bodies do entwine.

The pounding of the waves, against the sandy beach,

Puts everything in perspective, puts everything in reach.

It sounds like my heart beating, when you are around,

You drive me wild my darling, our relationship is sound.

For friends we won’t remain, there isn’t any doubt,

Lovers we will end up, lets get the secret out.

I need you to surrender, and give your love to me,

Cause if love me darling, together we will be.

I’m looking for you darling, to love me and to care,

So when you turn now sweetheart, I always will be there.

To guide you and to help you, through good times and the bad,

To give you love my princess, the most you’ve ever had
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 2 [informant] => markey [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I offer

Contributed by markey on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Walking with my darling, in the moonlight by the sea,

Every man in the world, was wishing he was me.

The rolling sound of waves, the wind blowing in your hair,

When I’m with you darling, I haven’t got a care.

Your beauty is just ravishing, your smile is so intense,

When I look into your eyes, the world starts making sense.

When you put your body, up tightly close to mine,

We wrap each other up tight, our bodies do entwine.

The pounding of the waves, against the sandy beach,

Puts everything in perspective, puts everything in reach.

It sounds like my heart beating, when you are around,

You drive me wild my darling, our relationship is sound.

For friends we won’t remain, there isn’t any doubt,

Lovers we will end up, lets get the secret out.

I need you to surrender, and give your love to me,

Cause if love me darling, together we will be.

I’m looking for you darling, to love me and to care,

So when you turn now sweetheart, I always will be there.

To guide you and to help you, through good times and the bad,

To give you love my princess, the most you’ve ever had

Copyright Â© markey ... [ 2002-10-22 21:45:00]
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Re: I offer (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 09:58:05 PM AEST
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Darling,
you always make my good times good and my bad times even better,
i hope we never loose this special thing that we both share together.
love your princess.

Re: I offer (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Wednesday, 23rd October 2002 @ 03:37:46 AM AEST
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This is so sweet, great write!

Curtis

Re: I offer (User Rating: 1 )
by AmazingKate on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 11:39:36 AM AEST
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What a lovely line this is:

When I look into your eyes, the world starts making sense..

So often the eyes are so telling... and the world does seem to make sense. This was a beautiful love poem!

Warm smiles,

Kate

Re: I offer (User Rating: 1 )
by Markey on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 05:27:11 PM AEST
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Thank you so very very much for your comments. It is comments like this that keep people inspired. TY.

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