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Array ( [sid] => 54377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => suicidal runaway [time] => 2004-07-01 13:17:43 [hometext] => why doesnt any one ever read my poems !!!!!!!! well read this !!!!!! [bodytext] => shes getting away
with only
two things on her mind
running away and suicide

running away
is weak
commiting suicide
even weaker

but she has to get away
without a thought
for either family or friend
as she escapes
on foot or by razor end

as her mother cries
what have i done wrong
it was the teens fault
all along

the young girl lost at sea
cries every night
for what could have been
as she dreams through a window
of the unforseen
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suicidal runaway

Contributed by kammie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:17:43 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

shes getting away
with only
two things on her mind
running away and suicide

running away
is weak
commiting suicide
even weaker

but she has to get away
without a thought
for either family or friend
as she escapes
on foot or by razor end

as her mother cries
what have i done wrong
it was the teens fault
all along

the young girl lost at sea
cries every night
for what could have been
as she dreams through a window
of the unforseen

Copyright © kammie ... [ 2004-07-01 13:17:43]
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Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:26:06 PM AEST
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I really can't answer why no one reads your writes.
good write, even tho it's sad.
huggs,
emy

Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:26:43 PM AEST
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It will be okay in the end, if it's not okay, it's not the end

Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:43:45 PM AEST
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this is very emotional , very sad, god knows why people dont read your poems, as they are missing out on a great read.....

pixie xx

Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 01:54:57 PM AEST
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"why doesnt any one ever read my poems !!!!!!!! well read this !!!!!!".......maybe its because you have only made 2 comments and posted 14 poems, aye? just start commenting and let people get to know you, you have talent:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 03:59:46 PM AEST
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for people to comment and read yours you have to comment and read back... great write though .. i hope this person is not you though.. in some point im sure everyone feels like they need to run away but suicide is a different story.. try to have more uplifting thoughts.. you can achieve anything and get through anything only if you wish to.. express your feelings to others though.. cant get through everything by yourself..

~neglected1~

Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:43:54 PM AEST
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very good poem and

Re: suicidal runaway (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 07:44:55 PM AEST
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very good poem and I hope that the person in this poem is not you....I think that you have talent, you just have to post and then more people will come eventually...
Love,
Jamie

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