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Journey
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:18:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Anger boils up inside her.
With the tears she dare not shed
She gazes down the road before her
The one that she must walk alone.
Step by step her pained feet lead her.
To some place she does not know
But to go back is not an option.
So she will walk on and on.
Soaring gates stand before her
So high they strike her down with fear
Now, before her, they creak open
Yet she cannot move her feet.
Her mind screams go on, go on
But her feet will not obey
Still, she summons all her courage
And walks into the gleaming city.
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Re: Journey
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by brew on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:21:09 PM AEST
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| Very descriptive.......Nice job! |
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Re: Journey
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by mdmorash on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 09:29:43 PM AEST
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| Great flow and imagery. |
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