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Array ( [sid] => 53918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nocturnal Kiss [time] => 2004-06-27 16:22:42 [hometext] => To the thrill of the dark hunt. The pattern and sentence structure is inspired by songs by Inkubus Sukkus. Panag Nobr [bodytext] => Darkened hearts no more beating
Thirsty minds bent on feeding
Slowly waken at sun’s setting
On our prey who are fretting.

Here we come, almost flying
People running, screaming, crying.
No, don’t run, it won’t save you
We are here to slightly drain you.

Your fear, we can smell it.
Just for us, we compel it
We only want one thing from you
Don’t you worry, it won’t hurt you.

We’ll give you a silver kiss
And send you to quiet bliss
Fast and strong your blood is pounding.
It’s that for which we’re hounding.

It’s so warm and refreshing
Fang and neck around are meshing
Blood is running red in beauty
Will we feed? Absolutely.

With dawn coming, we are finished
Now our thirst is diminished.
Now to sleep, now so tired
Till next night we’re retired.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MLCstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Nocturnal Kiss

Contributed by MLCstar on Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 04:22:42 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Darkened hearts no more beating
Thirsty minds bent on feeding
Slowly waken at sun’s setting
On our prey who are fretting.

Here we come, almost flying
People running, screaming, crying.
No, don’t run, it won’t save you
We are here to slightly drain you.

Your fear, we can smell it.
Just for us, we compel it
We only want one thing from you
Don’t you worry, it won’t hurt you.

We’ll give you a silver kiss
And send you to quiet bliss
Fast and strong your blood is pounding.
It’s that for which we’re hounding.

It’s so warm and refreshing
Fang and neck around are meshing
Blood is running red in beauty
Will we feed? Absolutely.

With dawn coming, we are finished
Now our thirst is diminished.
Now to sleep, now so tired
Till next night we’re retired.

Copyright Â© MLCstar ... [ 2004-06-27 16:22:42]
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Re: Nocturnal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 07:42:23 AM AEST
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wonderful images and oooo! i dont know those songs but your words are great:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Nocturnal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 11:06:56 AM AEST
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great write,

pixie xx

Re: Nocturnal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MissMandy on Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:34:23 PM AEST
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that's a little creepy, but it's a good write

Re: Nocturnal Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 04:19:31 PM AEST
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great poem.. you did a wonderful job on it.. you commented on beautiful halloween that was posted under my name but written by jeff.. i thought id let you know that he got a sn now and posts his work there his sn is TheLastStringCut.. well take care.. AMI JO

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