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Array ( [sid] => 5389 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => instructions for life [time] => 2002-10-21 23:30:00 [hometext] => i sit here wanting it all but do not have the ability to make it work...and oh how it hurts. [bodytext] => i hear you say it
how you want someone to love
i was all yours
but we grew apart

did we really?
i wish i knew
why we said goodbye
if i could change anything, it would be this
i really miss you
and i want you to love me again
i feel so alone

with all these words to say
and no one to say them to
and no way to say them right
to make you know my feelings

fate has us apart
but i want to be together so bad
i see you hug her and my heart is shot
executioner style
because you know i am watching
and i run and hide and cry
all my feeling converted to tears, to blood
pouring out of me

i didn't ask for my emotions to get in the way
i didn't want to even love you
but i find i am into our relationship farther than i want to be
sinking into the trap you have set
for my soul
you wear it around your neck, that tool you used
to capture me as a hostage
and i don't want you anymore if you make me cry

i don't want anyone if love is going to hurt me again and again
when will i learn?

i just want it all pure and simple again
don't you dare try and hurt me again

remember me...
oct 2002 [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 32 [informant] => dantoad [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
instructions for life

Contributed by dantoad on Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



i hear you say it
how you want someone to love
i was all yours
but we grew apart

did we really?
i wish i knew
why we said goodbye
if i could change anything, it would be this
i really miss you
and i want you to love me again
i feel so alone

with all these words to say
and no one to say them to
and no way to say them right
to make you know my feelings

fate has us apart
but i want to be together so bad
i see you hug her and my heart is shot
executioner style
because you know i am watching
and i run and hide and cry
all my feeling converted to tears, to blood
pouring out of me

i didn't ask for my emotions to get in the way
i didn't want to even love you
but i find i am into our relationship farther than i want to be
sinking into the trap you have set
for my soul
you wear it around your neck, that tool you used
to capture me as a hostage
and i don't want you anymore if you make me cry

i don't want anyone if love is going to hurt me again and again
when will i learn?

i just want it all pure and simple again
don't you dare try and hurt me again

remember me...
oct 2002




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Re: instructions for life (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 12:57:46 AM AEST
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wow i can feel the emotions running through this poem i wish the best for you.


Re: instructions for life (User Rating: 1 )
by meg on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 02:16:35 AM AEST
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i really know where your comming from, im in the same exact situation right now




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