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Array ( [sid] => 53772 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => music has no color [time] => 2004-06-26 11:05:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The affliction of my life
Is caused by ficticious strife
My problems are probably
Small
But they build a wall around my
Heart
Until I’ve lost touch with the one
Part of myself I once knew
The part that I gave to you
So I ask music to console me
To pick up my spirit and hold me
I know that r&b alone
Although poetic can’t soothe
My real life pain
And raps rhythmic words
Mostly absurd
Eventually all sound the same
Pop is too vigorous while
Rock too ambiguous and wild
Jazz puts me to sleep
While classical makes me weep
For the end drawing near
Feeding off the need to hear
Others lost expectations
Yes my black hand turns the station
To a country music song
And the thunder rolls…
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 25 [informant] => dominique [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

music has no color

Contributed by dominique on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:05:40 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

The affliction of my life
Is caused by ficticious strife
My problems are probably
Small
But they build a wall around my
Heart
Until I’ve lost touch with the one
Part of myself I once knew
The part that I gave to you
So I ask music to console me
To pick up my spirit and hold me
I know that r&b alone
Although poetic can’t soothe
My real life pain
And raps rhythmic words
Mostly absurd
Eventually all sound the same
Pop is too vigorous while
Rock too ambiguous and wild
Jazz puts me to sleep
While classical makes me weep
For the end drawing near
Feeding off the need to hear
Others lost expectations
Yes my black hand turns the station
To a country music song
And the thunder rolls…

Copyright © dominique ... [ 2004-06-26 11:05:40]
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Re: music has no color (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:10:55 AM AEST
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great poem

pixie xx

Re: music has no color (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:47:36 AM AEST
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Fantastic write, enjoyed it very much.

Re: music has no color (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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I, too, turn to music when I need something to lift my spirits. But C&W depresses the he** outta me. I was raised with it. I listen to hip-hop and D12 is one of my favs. I liked this, it was good and had good rhythm. Peace to ya.
Thumps ; 0 )

Re: music has no color (User Rating: 1 )
by EmilyMichaela on Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 05:19:26 PM AEST
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Oh wow I loved the way you included different genres. I love your poems their amazing

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