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Array ( [sid] => 53623 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my tears, no Never [time] => 2004-06-25 04:32:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>
These are the Apocalyptic
days of disue, abuse,
misuse and disintegration...

These are...


A slender figure stands
by blue water, black
sky overhead, no stars...
stagnant winds ruffle satin nightgown...

A redbrick building black and white,
cast iron bars encasing...


...soft hazel hair slight masking
green eyes
glint in shadow...

bowed head; tears...

...

These are the days when I will
surrender silhouette
to raised arms
front dying sunset...

I know love, my love
is for you but I know
you will never
hold me tight as I hold you...
hand and head on chest and
breath on neck,
no Never...


So my Apocalypse, is yours and
you stand barely human
hunched sinking underground
shoulders heaving, your tears match
my tears,
no Never

So to this I walk
away; from you in me
to underworld...
My Apocalypse is final

now and never.


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 13 [informant] => SensitiveSoAbused [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
my tears, no Never

Contributed by SensitiveSoAbused on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:32:35 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry




These are the Apocalyptic
days of disue, abuse,
misuse and disintegration...

These are...


A slender figure stands
by blue water, black
sky overhead, no stars...
stagnant winds ruffle satin nightgown...

A redbrick building black and white,
cast iron bars encasing...


...soft hazel hair slight masking
green eyes
glint in shadow...

bowed head; tears...

...

These are the days when I will
surrender silhouette
to raised arms
front dying sunset...

I know love, my love
is for you but I know
you will never
hold me tight as I hold you...
hand and head on chest and
breath on neck,
no Never...


So my Apocalypse, is yours and
you stand barely human
hunched sinking underground
shoulders heaving, your tears match
my tears,
no Never

So to this I walk
away; from you in me
to underworld...
My Apocalypse is final

now and never.






Copyright © SensitiveSoAbused ... [ 2004-06-25 04:32:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: my tears, no Never (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:49:56 AM AEST
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ohh very dark.. i liked it

pixie xx


Re: my tears, no Never (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 04:39:59 AM AEST
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*Gasps* Well.. i wasnt expecting any emotion
to be provoked so intensly like it was through this part
'I know love, my love
is for you but I know
you will never
hold me tight as I hold you...
hand and head on chest and
breath on neck, no Never...


So my Apocalypse, is yours and
you stand barely human
hunched sinking underground
shoulders heaving, your tears match
my tears,
no Never

So to this I walk
away; from you in me
to underworld...
My Apocalypse is final

now and never.'

*Gasps again* had to read that again

WoW...

BS x


Re: my tears, no Never (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 05:35:55 PM AEST
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Lane, i had to read this again,
hell man..
this is amazing
its so real
so heart felt
it touches me in the deepest part of my heart
it truly does
im not foolin
bravo *applauds you*

Gem x




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