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Into your room last night
And laid with you
In the soft moonlight

Which spilled in through your window
And onto your face
Onto your lips
Which I had to taste

But as I came near
You shed a single tear
Said, "Quit haunting my dreams."
And I said, "Baby, it's really me here."

But you didn't beleive
And you started to cry
So I took your sweet hand
And asked, "darling, why would I lie?"

The thing that kills me the most
Is that I hurt you so bad
You can't tell lie from reality
And you always seem sad

I did this to you
And I'm sorry for that, love
'Cause I've broken an angel
Sent from above [comments] => 7 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 32 [informant] => InnerBeautyQueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

I've Broken an Angel

Contributed by InnerBeautyQueen on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:36:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I came to you
Into your room last night
And laid with you
In the soft moonlight

Which spilled in through your window
And onto your face
Onto your lips
Which I had to taste

But as I came near
You shed a single tear
Said, "Quit haunting my dreams."
And I said, "Baby, it's really me here."

But you didn't beleive
And you started to cry
So I took your sweet hand
And asked, "darling, why would I lie?"

The thing that kills me the most
Is that I hurt you so bad
You can't tell lie from reality
And you always seem sad

I did this to you
And I'm sorry for that, love
'Cause I've broken an angel
Sent from above

Copyright © InnerBeautyQueen ... [ 2004-06-23 20:36:22]
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Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:38:10 PM AEST
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innerbeautyqueen - i am fast becoming a huge fan of yours....
this is an incredibly beautiful poem - it makes me want to cry

Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by sunnyrainbows on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:49:30 PM AEST
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hope u feel better soon!

Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:10:29 PM AEST
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Loved it, Loved it, and Loved it, don't know where you had those beautiful words hidden, but thanks so much for sharing this genuine gem, truely fabulous, take care Val

Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:24:36 PM AEST
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you're truly a beautiful poet :) I love your style...

ACY

Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:31:30 PM AEST
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awwww great write! this is very touching. I hope everything works out. amazing poem. A++++

Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:36:41 PM AEST
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What a beautiful heart you have! Christina

Re: I've Broken an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:56:34 AM AEST
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i have read a few of yours now and I am impressed you have great talent.....

pixie xx

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