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Pictures in place
A clock dings
It's nobody's mistake
Weave between the curtains
Watch your place
Hold the needle steady and secure
Twitch a bit
Watch the wind blow
Papers being carried away
All that work
Hard work indeaed
A needle breaks
Hear it crack!
It's too late! [comments] => 8 [counter] => 241 [topic] => 43 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Salted Needle Points

Contributed by pyrofungus on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:44:47 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Salted lungs
Pictures in place
A clock dings
It's nobody's mistake
Weave between the curtains
Watch your place
Hold the needle steady and secure
Twitch a bit
Watch the wind blow
Papers being carried away
All that work
Hard work indeaed
A needle breaks
Hear it crack!
It's too late!

Copyright © pyrofungus ... [ 2004-06-23 16:44:47]
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Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowDaughter on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:51:26 PM AEST
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Whoa . . . first 6 lines, especially, were great. Nicely done.

--Nora

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:53:26 PM AEST
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hmmm interesting write. creative wording. I'll have to read more of your work, this one is intriguing. A+++

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:17:00 PM AEST
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yes, interesting.... good write, well done!

*J*

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:32:20 PM AEST
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yes definitely very creative... great work*

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:03:30 PM AEST
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very artsy, refreshing to see something different

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by CeruleanAfterglo on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:43:57 PM AEST
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Very powerful and interesting, nice work :)

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 01:37:16 AM AEST
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Truly divine. It seems we are both keepers of the darkness. Excellent write.

(V)ortis-Dark

Re: Salted Needle Points (User Rating: 1 )
by frejya on Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:55:24 AM AEST
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wut does tht mean?
reply wid full details plz

me

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