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Array ( [sid] => 53100 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Winter Breeze [time] => 2004-06-21 23:31:04 [hometext] => I was in an odd mood when I wrote this. Maybe I was just trying to view death like someone who believes in an afterlife. I only like the first part.. the rest is kind of iffy to me. [bodytext] => Life is no longer
Somewhere I wish to be
The constant pain
Always on the brink
Of no longer being sane
Too many people
Who have hurt me
Thousands of scars
No one can see
Paths I have passed
And wish I would have taken
More than enough things
I have mistaken

Now death is all I pray for
It is all I see
Somewhere in it lies a hope
Of peace for eternity
The thought of no more
Pain, heartaches and fears
Puts my soul at ease
All it wants to be
Is swept away
On a silent winters eve
And play forever
Among misty clouds
Above the place where I left it all bethind
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xXxFaygoFetishxXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Winter Breeze

Contributed by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:31:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Life is no longer
Somewhere I wish to be
The constant pain
Always on the brink
Of no longer being sane
Too many people
Who have hurt me
Thousands of scars
No one can see
Paths I have passed
And wish I would have taken
More than enough things
I have mistaken

Now death is all I pray for
It is all I see
Somewhere in it lies a hope
Of peace for eternity
The thought of no more
Pain, heartaches and fears
Puts my soul at ease
All it wants to be
Is swept away
On a silent winters eve
And play forever
Among misty clouds
Above the place where I left it all bethind

Copyright © xXxFaygoFetishxXx ... [ 2004-06-21 23:31:04]
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Re: Winter Breeze (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:10:38 PM AEST
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*hugs u and wipes away your tears* I LOVE YOU MY GIRLFRIEND *winks* you know my cellamaphone number and ANYTIME you are down or just want someone to talk to ami jo is ALWAYS here.. i love ya... AMI JO

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