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9-11..
How many must die?

Why don't these people see?
"The planes are very safe"
Not their not! They aren’t as safe as they could be!

The easy way to travel
But all of these other things,
They’re starting to unravel

To all who died
Rest in peace
Lord have mercy to all who lied

We had to scare the nation half to death
To prove life is the greatest gift of all
How would you like to be the one taking your last breath?

We give up our money
To help us live better lives
Why don't we spend it on planes? Crashing isn't funny

This is the way I must deal
With my anger
And how I really feel

We lost two people who everyone did love
Many more who know one knew
Now their living in the sky above

I scream I cry I beg and prey
We shouldn't lose these people
It must get better... someday [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 8 [informant] => Wiccan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )

Planes

Contributed by Wiccan on Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

We lost Aaliyah and Left Eye
9-11..
How many must die?

Why don't these people see?
"The planes are very safe"
Not their not! They aren’t as safe as they could be!

The easy way to travel
But all of these other things,
They’re starting to unravel

To all who died
Rest in peace
Lord have mercy to all who lied

We had to scare the nation half to death
To prove life is the greatest gift of all
How would you like to be the one taking your last breath?

We give up our money
To help us live better lives
Why don't we spend it on planes? Crashing isn't funny

This is the way I must deal
With my anger
And how I really feel

We lost two people who everyone did love
Many more who know one knew
Now their living in the sky above

I scream I cry I beg and prey
We shouldn't lose these people
It must get better... someday

Copyright Â© Wiccan ... [ 2002-10-19 16:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Planes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 04:50:19 PM AEST
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Hi Wiccan,
I'm so sorry for your loss and all who lost luved ones that day!!!!
Thank you so much for sharing this!!! I can never imagene the feeling that you have.....
Very good way of dealing with anger, I'd say.
PEACE, LUV, FREEDOM!
emy

Re: Planes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 6th January 2003 @ 04:07:22 PM AEST
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I am so very sorry for your loss,
'A candle that shines twice as bright; burns half as long.' has always helped me when dealing with losing loved ones by death...
Always Nessa
*huggs*

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