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A Poem for Mom
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:07:23 PM in AEST
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Caring word like sweet fresh water
Wash away the fear and doubt
A mothers love can build strong mountains
And gently drive our demons out
Cradling us when theres no other
To wipe away our bitter tears
She holds our hand when we need guidance
Loving us throughout our years.
She cares for us when we are hating
Our anger turning us away
With maternal patience she is waiting
For when we have our waking day
Oh this devotion, there is none like it
And never will there ever be
Yes, she always wants to keep us
But shell always set us free
Mom will be there when we have no one
Holding out her healing arms
Her wise clear eyes see our center
Far beyond these worldly charms.
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MLCstar
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Re: A Poem for Mom
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:13:58 PM AEST
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This is a lovely tribute to your mother. This is how I have always viewed my mother. She has always been there behind me helping me to mold myself in life. She has lost everyone but my sister and I and she still has a heart full of love and devotion. She is the strongest person I know.
Welcome to YPDC. You will find a lot of caring sensitive people here. I hope you will spend a lot of time with us.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: A Poem for Mom
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:21:46 AM AEST
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| Beautiful tribute to your mother...welcome to YPDC..keep writing on.. venkat |
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Re: A Poem for Mom
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:14:30 AM AEST
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awww this is one of the most lovliest and heartfelt dedications I have read on here up to now, well done to you.
pixie xx |
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Re: A Poem for Mom
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:47:16 PM AEST
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Oh, I do hope she has read this! It is quite a lovely tribute to your mom. A mother's love... there just isn't anything like it. Very well said by you!
Welcome! Welcome! to YPDC. Please keep posting here... I've enjoyed reading some of your work-
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Re: A Poem for Mom
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:20:13 PM AEST
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| im sure when your mother reads this her eyes will fill with tears. its a very touching poem and well written..nice job.. AMI JO |
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Re: A Poem for Mom
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by WestCPunk on
Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 11:56:48 PM AEST
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This poem litterally made me cry! It makes me wish that i had a mother who actually cared, someone there to help me along the way, but i don't. I have a mother who loves her job more than her own kid.
Great writing,
Shelbi |
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