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Severing every one of our ties,
That we have shared over the years,
Instead of smiles, all I have is tears.

I used to believe everything you said,
Now you untruths swim round my head
I just don’t trust you anymore,
I feel fear when you walk out the door.

Not knowing what you’re doing,
Or what temptation you’re pursuing,
While my back is turned,
Am I going to get my heart burned?

When we’re in bed where are your thoughts?
Are you worrying about getting caught?
That I may discover your sordid affair,
Why do this to me when you say you care?

I confront you but you flatly deny,
Which makes me feel guilty & start to cry,
Then I feel bad for accusing you,
I have no proof, what more can I do.

I can not go on living like this,
Wondering if you want her when we kiss,
If when we make love it’s her face you see,
Why oh why do you prefer her to me?

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Lies

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:58:46 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Why do you fill my head with lies,
Severing every one of our ties,
That we have shared over the years,
Instead of smiles, all I have is tears.

I used to believe everything you said,
Now you untruths swim round my head
I just don’t trust you anymore,
I feel fear when you walk out the door.

Not knowing what you’re doing,
Or what temptation you’re pursuing,
While my back is turned,
Am I going to get my heart burned?

When we’re in bed where are your thoughts?
Are you worrying about getting caught?
That I may discover your sordid affair,
Why do this to me when you say you care?

I confront you but you flatly deny,
Which makes me feel guilty & start to cry,
Then I feel bad for accusing you,
I have no proof, what more can I do.

I can not go on living like this,
Wondering if you want her when we kiss,
If when we make love it’s her face you see,
Why oh why do you prefer her to me?

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-06-20 11:58:46]
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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:08:40 PM AEST
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I can not really relate to this poem in it's straight forward sense but it is good. I can relate it to friendship.

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:05:55 PM AEST
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brilliant, i love how you place yourself in another's soul, excellent compassionate view and style of writing you have:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:02:56 PM AEST
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Awesome! I loved it, and it was well written.
~Kris~

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:41:33 PM AEST
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thats a pretty damn good poem for never going through that loved it well written beauitful

l3xxi3

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:45:53 PM AEST
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pixie
Nice work, you convey the emotions very well!
Keep it up!

Phil

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by willow_tara72002 on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:07:05 AM AEST
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I can completly relate to everythign you said. This happened when i was in a relationship with my first love. Most my lost love poetry is about her.eat descriptions.

-Amber

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:51:44 AM AEST
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creative rhyming as always.. great write*

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:10:02 AM AEST
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Good job Pixie, that was an excellent write. Very well developed & I loved the rythem & flow to it. Another great write. Keep them coming.
Corinna

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:55:22 AM AEST
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wonderful write, it flows beautifully. good job. i loved these lines:

When we’re in bed where are your thoughts?
Are you worrying about getting caught?
That I may discover your sordid affair,
Why do this to me when you say you care?

i understand just how you feel. 5 stars.

mel

Re: Lies (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:17:05 PM AEST
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Great poem. A moral Question That so many have forgotten to ask.
Peace and love to ya

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