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a hue of love
Contributed by
faz
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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hush them thush them first
o fanatic, o tramp,o lover
on your art, you should have trust
its a hue of love, its a due of summer
follow your illusions, live in dreams
hardships and tears are life's part
lo there is sale of beauty,and milky streams
so gambled your life in the way of heart
far away someone playing lute
there touched me a ray of mote
wracking my soul, trambling my body
lets do something for welcoming ruot
faizan
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faz
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2004-06-20 10:31:11]
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Re: a hue of love
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 06:25:39 PM AEST
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very pretty, although i do not understand your last line.. warm welcome to ypdc too, i look forward to more of your well woven words:) hugs n' love nessa
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