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[aid] => mick
[title] => Um Yeah Well, None yet!
[time] => 2004-06-19 03:57:46
[hometext] => I read and liked a line on one of Lovingcritters poems and have borrowed it, thanks Consue :)
[bodytext] =>
Love as much as you can,
Take as little as you need
Let’s try and remove
Some of the hate and the greed
When life gets you down
Let us look to the light
Think of the little things
That make you smile bright
When you think all is lost
And that no one cares
There’s sure somewhere a friend
That you didn’t realise was there
When you see one that’s falling
Please lend a helping hand
Despite what they’ve done
Let us try to understand
And for our children
The future of our land
Let's teach them what’s right
So they make a firm stand
The borrowed line is the first line of the poem. :)
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[informant] => Mick_Puttock
[notes] => (Edited by Mod_11) :>)
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[alanguage] => english
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[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 0
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Um Yeah Well, None yet!
Contributed by
Mick_Puttock
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:57:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Love as much as you can,
Take as little as you need
Let’s try and remove
Some of the hate and the greed
When life gets you down
Let us look to the light
Think of the little things
That make you smile bright
When you think all is lost
And that no one cares
There’s sure somewhere a friend
That you didn’t realise was there
When you see one that’s falling
Please lend a helping hand
Despite what they’ve done
Let us try to understand
And for our children
The future of our land
Let's teach them what’s right
So they make a firm stand
The borrowed line is the first line of the poem. :)
Copyright ©
Mick_Puttock
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2004-06-19 03:57:46]
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 04:01:06 AM AEST
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Thanks Mick for sharing this wise piece of wonderful poetry its so true it really is hugs to the kids
Michelle |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 04:16:03 AM AEST
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| Most beautiful poem with most beautiful advice..:o) venkat |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:11:22 AM AEST
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Loved the poem from start to finish Mick.
An inspiration to one and all.
Beautiful full of wise words
Love Sweetangelukxxxxxxxxx |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:19:03 AM AEST
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Wwooo Mick u got it going on. You've jus written a masterpeice.
Wise words to live by.
luv, huggs,
smiles,
emy
More please? |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by thumper on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:44:10 AM AEST
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Wouldn't it be nice if everyone thought this way?Very nice sentiment espically the last stanza. I liked this one very much. Nice flow. Write on and Peace to you.
Thumps ; 0 ) |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 07:04:07 AM AEST
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Lovely sentiments. The world would be a wonderful place if we would all heed these words, but alas, it is not always easy.
Rita |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by hooray_its_jen on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:28:31 AM AEST
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Yeah, Mick! I enjoyed every part of this poem....Yes we should all try to live by these words, it would make a big difference. Great poem!
~Jenna |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 04:06:31 PM AEST
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Very good advice, Mickey.....:)
Thanks for posting....
((((((((((((hugs)))))))))))
Jen |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:14:12 AM AEST
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this is wonderful, mick, delightfully uplifting and a great message for all!
hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:25:03 PM AEST
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words after my own heart.
Nicely said. |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by critterhideaway on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 10:43:13 PM AEST
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| Very good advice, hope I can do it, yes we need to teach our children right, too many go through life without guidence and wind up where I work, in a prison. If they only had parents to care. Good thanks |
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by critterhideaway on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 08:00:48 PM AEST
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| Very good advice, thank you for sharing, if only we could follow this. |
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Re: Um Yeah Well, None yet!
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 29th April 2007 @ 10:43:30 PM AEST
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| Great advice. Put well into verse. Our children yes do need to be taught to take a better stand.What better food than lots of love. |
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