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Array ( [sid] => 52594 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Go Back [time] => 2004-06-18 15:07:44 [hometext] => This poem is about a real life event of a friend of mine. [bodytext] => I feel in love
Bigger than the stars above
Then it was taken away
And now I pay
I was so happy the day I said yes
As for the question
I'll let you guess

My parents didn't like him
So, I hated them
But, by saying yes
I did my best
To defy me folks
And talk to him when I wasn't allowed
Hanging with the wrong crowd
All I did was make a mess

I lost my parents trust
All because of lust
And in the end I lost
All at a cost
Because of the love I so dearly wanted
I will forever be haunted
And I can never go back [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PunkRocker494 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Never Go Back

Contributed by PunkRocker494 on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I feel in love
Bigger than the stars above
Then it was taken away
And now I pay
I was so happy the day I said yes
As for the question
I'll let you guess

My parents didn't like him
So, I hated them
But, by saying yes
I did my best
To defy me folks
And talk to him when I wasn't allowed
Hanging with the wrong crowd
All I did was make a mess

I lost my parents trust
All because of lust
And in the end I lost
All at a cost
Because of the love I so dearly wanted
I will forever be haunted
And I can never go back

Copyright © PunkRocker494 ... [ 2004-06-18 15:07:44]
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Re: Never Go Back (User Rating: 1 )
by luckycharm on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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I like the title of your poem and I love the poem. You have a very unique writing style that no one can take.-luckycharm.

Re: Never Go Back (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:51:28 PM AEST
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I agree with the first persons comment....I too have lost my parents trust by hanging with the wrong whatever crowd person you know the whole thing....they think that hanging with the punk kids...that Im a shame t the family...well my family may not trust me but they love m...so I stick with what makes em happy...hopefully they will realize that their kid is happy....I too wish the best for you and your familt...keep it up....
much love,
Dani
I really enjoy your writing!!!! strong!!! Beutiful!!!

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