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Like raindrops fall from the skies,
Caressing my cheeks as they trickle so,
Tickling my face as they freely flow.

Down my face my tears travel,
As this pain in my mind I try to unravel,
Feelings of being all alone,
Without any place to call my home.

The droplets of sadness reach my lips,
Melting into them, they softly kiss,
Disappearing without leaving a trace,
But this feeling inside I can not erase.

My eyes are a window to my soul,
And so from here my pain unfolds,
Unfold in the form of bitter tears,
That leave me vulnerable and expose my fears.

Not many things can make me cry,
I’m always left with the question …why?
Why do my tears have to fall,
Why does crying leave me feeling so small.

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Tears

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:03:18 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Tears fall from my eyes,
Like raindrops fall from the skies,
Caressing my cheeks as they trickle so,
Tickling my face as they freely flow.

Down my face my tears travel,
As this pain in my mind I try to unravel,
Feelings of being all alone,
Without any place to call my home.

The droplets of sadness reach my lips,
Melting into them, they softly kiss,
Disappearing without leaving a trace,
But this feeling inside I can not erase.

My eyes are a window to my soul,
And so from here my pain unfolds,
Unfold in the form of bitter tears,
That leave me vulnerable and expose my fears.

Not many things can make me cry,
I’m always left with the question …why?
Why do my tears have to fall,
Why does crying leave me feeling so small.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-06-15 11:03:18]
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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by RhythmBndt on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:08:25 AM AEST
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Crying is a good release at times :) Great write.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:11:23 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed it pix, yeah I liked it a lot! I loved the way you captured the feelings of crying & how the poem un-folded. Very nice.
Corinna

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by eatfresh22 on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:15:29 AM AEST
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I really liked,

My eyes are a window to my soul.

How true! Very beautiful poem. Crying is a crazy, refreshing, sad thing! Nicely depicted.
~Carrie~

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by MDodgen on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:16:17 AM AEST
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another wonderful write. crystal clear imagery. almost made me want to cry, but see i cry at everything. great job pixie. 5 stars

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by diamond_tears on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:41:10 AM AEST
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wonderful.. i love poems about tears! xxx

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:07:31 PM AEST
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beautifully sad...... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 12:08:01 PM AEST
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beautiful wording... great job!

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by slackoffsamiam on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 06:18:49 PM AEST
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you capture feelings so well im almost envious, maybe one day ill get some pointers from you.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 08:44:57 PM AEST
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This is why I love poems about tears and the like.
Its so magical yet sad at the same time.
Great write here, pixie. Loved it.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by lexxie on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 11:44:28 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful no words can describ......very powerful right agian nice rythem

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 01:20:49 PM AEST
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Your words go out touching those who read.
Showing us your vulnerable true self. Your sound is so sad. I hope you feel better. Great poem.

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