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Array ( [sid] => 52039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My letter of resignation [time] => 2004-06-15 10:41:08 [hometext] => Not amazing, but fun non the less, enjoy, comment on whats good, bad, or just plain ugly, enjoy peoples [bodytext] => what are you gonna do
when my bags are packed
and im ready to leave you

did you plan for my heart
did you care what i meant
did i think not more of less more than of ya?

lets sit at the disscusion table
what wentr wrong eh?
we were rokin
now our love is dead

feels so flat and boring
we went too OTT too soon
now its just blah
when we was yeah!

could it of been me
i blame you
but it could of been me

but what does it matter anyway
my steamer trunk
and im gonna get the next ride outta here

phone me if u can answer me right
and i might be sorry that i left
you made me the theif of love

and send me back to the prision in my soul

for the grand crime of love theift [comments] => 3 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 52 [informant] => 01_zanzebar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

My letter of resignation

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 10:41:08 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

what are you gonna do
when my bags are packed
and im ready to leave you

did you plan for my heart
did you care what i meant
did i think not more of less more than of ya?

lets sit at the disscusion table
what wentr wrong eh?
we were rokin
now our love is dead

feels so flat and boring
we went too OTT too soon
now its just blah
when we was yeah!

could it of been me
i blame you
but it could of been me

but what does it matter anyway
my steamer trunk
and im gonna get the next ride outta here

phone me if u can answer me right
and i might be sorry that i left
you made me the theif of love

and send me back to the prision in my soul

for the grand crime of love theift

Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-06-15 10:41:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My letter of resignation (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 11:30:45 AM AEST
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good poem,

pixie xx

Re: My letter of resignation (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 01:08:19 PM AEST
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unique style... interesting writing. good job *

Re: My letter of resignation (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Tuesday, 15th June 2004 @ 03:37:16 PM AEST
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I like your unique style, although it needs fine tuning. It seems like you are trying to fit in too much information and so it doesn't make sense alot of the time. Perhaps creating fewer, more emotionally charged phrases could help. Also, check your spelling man! Otherwise I liked it.

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