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Array ( [sid] => 51970 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => When [time] => 2004-06-14 22:33:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => When is the last time you looked up at the stars
And wandered what is like on mars

When is the last time that you looked into someones eyes
And watched the sun rise
And it made you feel as if you werent alive
Like it was just a dream
Or some crazy scene

When is the last time that you went to church
Thought about God
And prayed till it hurt
Wandering if he was there answering your prayer

When is the last time that you sat outside
Looked up at the sky
And watched the clouds go by

When is the last time that you looked up at a tree
And saw a bird happy and free
That is flying around
And not on the ground
Enjoying itself
And humming a wonderful sound

When is the last time you put down the books
And turned off the T.V
And actually looked at all the things that God has made for us to see

We all take advantages each and everyday
And never wonder what life would be like if the earth wasnt this way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 19 [informant] => NoahsARK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

When

Contributed by NoahsARK on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:33:37 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

When is the last time you looked up at the stars
And wandered what is like on mars

When is the last time that you looked into someones eyes
And watched the sun rise
And it made you feel as if you werent alive
Like it was just a dream
Or some crazy scene

When is the last time that you went to church
Thought about God
And prayed till it hurt
Wandering if he was there answering your prayer

When is the last time that you sat outside
Looked up at the sky
And watched the clouds go by

When is the last time that you looked up at a tree
And saw a bird happy and free
That is flying around
And not on the ground
Enjoying itself
And humming a wonderful sound

When is the last time you put down the books
And turned off the T.V
And actually looked at all the things that God has made for us to see

We all take advantages each and everyday
And never wonder what life would be like if the earth wasnt this way

Copyright © NoahsARK ... [ 2004-06-14 22:33:37]
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Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Fluffhead on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:42:24 PM AEST
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Well NoahsARK i love the poem hope to see more here soon.

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 10:44:36 PM AEST
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Been a while, actually!! Thanks for the reminder.... I'm gonna get off here soon and go look at the stars...:>)
Good write...Welcome to YPDC...
Jenni

Re: When (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 11:18:09 PM AEST
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actually anita, i was just out on the steps looking at the stars lol, came in and saw you left me a comment, thank you, warm welcome to ypdc, this is a beautifully written poem here:) hugs n' love nessa

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