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[title] => impact
[time] => 2004-06-14 15:33:35
[hometext] => this is a poem about a car accident i got into in aug.. where i ended up having three surgeries and learning how to walk again on my 16th birthday
[bodytext] => loud music and high pitched screams smiles across all four young faces wheels slide and laughs are silenced horrified faces watch very intently finally all four wheels meet the ground three bodies remain shocked inside one consciouss body lay underneath two minds comprehend what has happened other two brains are so confused the name of the trapped one is screamed calm voice asks for friends help adrenaline rush lifts up the vehicle with assistance the body rises slowly it lays down in the backseat a bloody face peers over a broken window hushed apologies escapes worried lips one assists her to her blood staind sister other helps his immovable friend shaky voice calls in a local emergency terrified daughter calls her parents scared driver calls his, then the dreaded phone call made to the broken one's family bloody face girl wanders around body and mind racing through the field paralyzed one loses her patience wants help to arrive right now mothers driver, a nurse, appears helps out in any way possible finally sirens scream out franticlly paralayzed one sees nothing but black voices tell the body what to do board is slid underneath and strapped moving stops and more waiting after many long minutes, it arrives paramedics move motionless body inside another body covered in chrimson follows smallest body climbs in front and watches men ask the bodies their names one responds to their questions other body utters a painful groan no words escape the blood covered face three injured bodies taken away rushed to the emergency room [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 51 [informant] => deadbloodyrose [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )
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