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Array ( [sid] => 51815 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Winter Clear [time] => 2004-06-14 00:36:51 [hometext] => A song I started to write on the piano last year but never got past the 1st verse. I made a simple midi so you can listen to the melody as you read the words: http://www.geocities.com/joan_nga/winterclear.mid It's not fantastic but it always makes me sad. [bodytext] => (Imagine a glasshouse at night with rays of moonlight washing in, and outside is a frosty winter of blue-white snow.)

Every night I thought I felt the moonlight
Washing all this pain and grief away from me
But I can’t help but think about
The times you sat beside me and held my hand

I know that dream isn’t real anymore
But I saw you here, winter-clear, once before... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 34 [informant] => wray [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Winter Clear

Contributed by wray on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 12:36:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

(Imagine a glasshouse at night with rays of moonlight washing in, and outside is a frosty winter of blue-white snow.)

Every night I thought I felt the moonlight
Washing all this pain and grief away from me
But I can’t help but think about
The times you sat beside me and held my hand

I know that dream isn’t real anymore
But I saw you here, winter-clear, once before...

Copyright Â© wray ... [ 2004-06-14 00:36:51]
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Re: Winter Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 01:27:46 AM AEST
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very sad start here wray, you should finish it im intersted to see what you can do with it. I bet it would be as great as your others.... good start.

Re: Winter Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:53:54 AM AEST
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very good write... I hope you finish it someday.
also the music is very pretty: *loving the fact that you gave us the midi to listen to* :)

Re: Winter Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:34:18 AM AEST
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I listened to the midi sample while I read this and I have to admit it certainly heighteins the reading experience. It's a beautiful piece of music, very sad but exactly something I would listen to.

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