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[aid] => mick
[title] => The One Who Doesn't Care
[time] => 2004-06-13 20:10:27
[hometext] => I originally wrote this as a song but it's much more like a poem I guess because of all the verses. The second verse was going to be the chorus.
[bodytext] => I'm the one with the blank stare The girl with the long hair I'm the one who doesn't care anymore SI'm the one who thinks everyone has left without here I'm the only one still standing here I'm the one, then one with the bruised lefs I'm the one who, who said "I don't need you" Now I'm the one who doesn't care anymore The girl with the chipped nails Everything I do I fail I'm still waiting for my bus I'm still waiting ot get out of this place I'm the one with the faint smile Dull glarea nd my angry stare Aren't we a lot alike Two faded souls, Our minds on strike And everything about you has diminished I'm just waiting for this route to finish Everything here is wasted You can tell by looking at our faces easily All my life empty eye sockets Staring at us And we're hollow within Is it better if we never begin? Not expected to finsh that way Not left here to diminish into barren nothingness that way I'm the girl with the big dreams Even though it seems I'm not doing anything at all But my life hasn't lost all meaning And now I'm only thinking About how I've wanted to change I'm the one, the one with the bruised legs I'm the one who, who said "I don't need you" Now I'm the one who doesn't care anymore [comments] => 1 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 61 [informant] => iluvpencils [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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