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Mother Of Darkness
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
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Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:02:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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rising the stream of blood does i can see it i can feel it tiding with my feet i crunch the dirt the sound of screams echoes the tide of hell is coming in now the day even though light is drawing dark the sky hits complete shadow like underneath a blanket only pin points of light seep through red stars blue galaxys never safe comets glide over the ocean of blood and a dead hand reaches out its him my heart bounces excitidly hes coming get ready look proud no look scared hes the all powerful one hes comiing closer hes walking apon the blood i can see the faces of the dead zombies of the hell my prince of darkness i the queen we rule power the underground my babies of night crawl they cry for their mother i nurse them i kill them more make them stronger by making them weaker iam the mother of the dark who feeds the dead i look after the sick while others persue him i look after him i look after you iam the mother of eternity yes iam the mary of the lord he will die soon the mother of darkness.....
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Re: Mother Of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by betty on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:06:59 PM AEST (User
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| Pretty enjoyable. A little disturbing, hope that's what you werre going for. Nice poem. |
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Re: Mother Of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:43:47 PM AEST (User
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| Wierd but it sort of makes sense too if you look at it for a while. |
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Re: Mother Of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by HellsLibrarian on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:50:47 PM AEST (User
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| thanks for looking after me. |
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Re: Mother Of Darkness
(User Rating: 1 ) by Solnubis on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:47:03 AM AEST (User
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| I don't like the topiec but the description of what your wiriting is very visual. You used your words well. |
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