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Regale me with sun and sand
Water as blue as Eros eyes
Tempt me – splashing
Coconut fills my senses
Tropical essence of life
Warm breezes
Gentle sway of palms, always smiling
Could oasis become the norm?
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Formula of Oasis

Contributed by merry on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:49:45 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

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Regale me with sun and sand
Water as blue as Eros eyes
Tempt me – splashing
Coconut fills my senses
Tropical essence of life
Warm breezes
Gentle sway of palms, always smiling
Could oasis become the norm?

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Re: Formula of Oasis (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:53:33 AM AEST
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This is a good poem Merry, I like it the imagery.

Re: Formula of Oasis (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 06:57:08 AM AEST
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i, personally prefere darker writes my-self, but i like this one very much!

i like where you've put,
"tropical essence of life" and coconut fills my senses". those two lines are very well put together.

Re: Formula of Oasis (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:26:25 AM AEST
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Wow! i can see it already!
It sounds perfect.
Have room for one more? lol
Great imagery.
I will treasure it. lol
*hugs* phil xxx

Re: Formula of Oasis (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:36:37 AM AEST
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LOVE this feeling. You have conveyed it so perfectly and with so few words. BRAVO!
Stitch

Re: Formula of Oasis (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 02:42:24 PM AEST
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well, what a place that would be, would you write? hehe, you take the sun and surf gaille and ill write from some nice cool rainy place, maybe the brazillian rainforests, remind me not to make friends with the headhunters and crocodiles, whilst you collect a beautiful tan and seashells lol, woofies, huggies n' love nessa

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Re: Formula of Oasis (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 04:55:19 PM AEST
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If ya think yer goin' without me think again ;o)

hehehe
Beautiful
Roses
Larry

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