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Thunderous End
Contributed by
RequiemForADream
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Saturday, 12th June 2004 @ 10:45:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My eyes open to a thunderous sound
There is rain and lightening all around
The wind whips the trees violently
My curiosity takes me completely
I put on my shoes to head out into the night
Not sure if I am trembling from excitement or fright
I open the door into the cool dark air
And for a moment I hesitate standing there
I step out into the pouring abyss
Wonder if I go will this life I miss
Farther I stray from the safety of cover
My heart racing as if I were with my lover
The rain is hitting me hard and cold
And I think so much for getting old
I hear the sound of a strong wind
As a tree falls I become pinned
As the sky flashes I look upon my death
And smile cynically with my last dying breath
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Re: Thunderous End
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by Stitch on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 07:40:00 AM AEST
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I can relate to this...especially the part about feeling called out in the night. I often feel that way. Another interesting and full write.
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Re: Thunderous End
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by pixie on
Sunday, 13th June 2004 @ 10:57:57 AM AEST
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great poem, look forward to reading more
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Re: Thunderous End
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by arden on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:48:02 AM AEST
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i say if you like storms and if you go out into one thats dangerous then you deserve to get hit by a tree lol (kidding)
the rhyme was smooth the imagery was awesome. i liked it alot. :)
*hugs*
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