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Reality
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 10:31:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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another day in this world
another day without you
another day besides some other guy
another way another day
crushed by you
stomped on
then let free
flown away like a butterfly
like you made me
fragile and timid
now im back and your gone
left me
im disowned
push your hand inside of me
feel my soul
hold my heart
feel the warmth of my blood
live for me
ill live through you
when it all falls down
we'll be there together forever
stroke my hair
pet me like the animal i deserve to be
following like a *****
coming up short
second last
life as a mongrel
life as a short
life is short
so make it quick
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2004-06-11 10:31:48]
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Re: Reality
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by pixie on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:02:08 AM AEST
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Great poem, alot of feeling here, good job
pixie xx |
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Re: Reality
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 11:06:49 AM AEST
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I think the last 4 lines were strong.
Nice job |
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Re: Reality
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by Darksand on
Sunday, 9th October 2011 @ 11:07:33 AM AEST
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| I love the poem, strong one. I feel just like that sometimes. |
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