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Array ( [sid] => 51356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Will You Ever Forgive Me ? [time] => 2004-06-10 18:47:12 [hometext] => I wrote this to a friend that I hurt so much by telling a secret that wasn't true... [bodytext] => I want to die tomorrow
to get away from all of my sorrow
I’m in a world of deep distress and regret
I wish that I could just forget
why does everything I do turn out wrong?
all my life I’ve driven away my loved ones
and now, you too are gone
because you left, I’m suffering from a great deal of anguish
my body is still here, but my soul has vanished
with sadness and hatred thick in the air
its too much to handle
its too much to bear
how could I hurt you like that? I ask myself
and with that question, reality hit me with a "THWACK!"
I’ve never been a good friend to you
after all that I’ve done, I know this is true
I’m the one to blame, and I always have been
you accepted me for who I was,
you even trusted me as your friend
and look how it all came to an end
I have to make things right
its the least I can do
and you don’t even have to like me
I just simply want you to see
that you mean so much to me
and I am truly sorry
will you ever forgive me?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 262 [topic] => 50 [informant] => kamiKAZE [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )
Will You Ever Forgive Me ?

Contributed by kamiKAZE on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:47:12 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry



I want to die tomorrow
to get away from all of my sorrow
I’m in a world of deep distress and regret
I wish that I could just forget
why does everything I do turn out wrong?
all my life I’ve driven away my loved ones
and now, you too are gone
because you left, I’m suffering from a great deal of anguish
my body is still here, but my soul has vanished
with sadness and hatred thick in the air
its too much to handle
its too much to bear
how could I hurt you like that? I ask myself
and with that question, reality hit me with a "THWACK!"
I’ve never been a good friend to you
after all that I’ve done, I know this is true
I’m the one to blame, and I always have been
you accepted me for who I was,
you even trusted me as your friend
and look how it all came to an end
I have to make things right
its the least I can do
and you don’t even have to like me
I just simply want you to see
that you mean so much to me
and I am truly sorry
will you ever forgive me?




Copyright © kamiKAZE ... [ 2004-06-10 18:47:12]
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Re: Will You Ever Forgive Me ? (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 06:53:09 PM AEST
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Awww I am sorry you feel this way, I am sure that you will be forgiven....

great poem

pixie xx


Re: Will You Ever Forgive Me ? (User Rating: 1 )
by emptySOUL on Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 12:15:34 AM AEST
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you know...if i know the person that you're talkin about...i think she will forgive you if you tell her the truth because i dont think you have told her.

JAdE




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