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stopping to pick up the dead
longing to back but come to far

im wondering the streets at night
flirting with the temptations of angelic sin
lifting up my wings to find there broken
my haylo left on the ground
dead isnt the word
i cannot think of it my emotions to high
im crawling to existence

my heart bounces against my skin
i can feel it ripple then start again

my bearings as a child
have left me scared
and scard on the outside and in

im falling downwards
the rocks seem to crumble under my fingertips
i cant hold on
my own fate
my decision
my life of innocence

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My Own Innocence

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 11:53:14 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

im running through fields of innocence
stopping to pick up the dead
longing to back but come to far

im wondering the streets at night
flirting with the temptations of angelic sin
lifting up my wings to find there broken
my haylo left on the ground
dead isnt the word
i cannot think of it my emotions to high
im crawling to existence

my heart bounces against my skin
i can feel it ripple then start again

my bearings as a child
have left me scared
and scard on the outside and in

im falling downwards
the rocks seem to crumble under my fingertips
i cant hold on
my own fate
my decision
my life of innocence

Copyright © Hannah_Heaven ... [ 2004-06-10 11:53:14]
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Re: My Own Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 12:09:29 PM AEST
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dark and mysterious.....makes you think!!!

Blessed Be!!!!

Re: My Own Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 02:59:11 PM AEST
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Very vivid and well-expressed. Hold on! Innocence we cannot keep, but we can trade it for wisdom. Don't lose it all in the dark!
Blessings
Andrew

Re: My Own Innocence (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:20:35 AM AEST
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great write.

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