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My Greatest Fear
Contributed by
Arius-Inues
on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 07:56:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The fear is increasing,
More rapid and rapid,
With each passing moment,
Of waking each moment,
Only to go to,
A job that I hate,
Going home every night,
To a cold, lonely, and loveless home,
And each night,
Crying my-self to sleep,
Time moves on,
And nothing changed,
Still the same thing,
Day after day,
Waiting for death to come,
And pleaing it was now,
This is my biggest fear,
And as time progresses,
This fear turns to,
Reality and,
It seems to be,
My fate.
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Arius-Inues
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2004-06-09 19:56:20]
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Re: My Greatest Fear
(User Rating: 1 )
by dragonlover on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 09:07:24 PM AEST
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| i dont think you should give up on poetry because it is something that is inspired and i think that you are just not that inspired. and as for your poem it is really not that bad |
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