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[sid] => 50905
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Touch my hand
[time] => 2004-06-08 01:20:26
[hometext] => Words forced out upon a certain emotion.
[bodytext] => Apparently, I'm not good enough for you Apparently, I'm not close enough to you This just doesn't feel right. There should be something more here. I search, and strive for the goal. Don't you understand? You place me in a separate class The juxtaposition startles us both. What happens, when we're forced to show what happens when emotions rise. I'm ready, are you? There should be something more here. Somewhere, the same thing is happening Except it follows the proper discourse The parallel-you and parallel-me have the simple difference The goal has been obtained in that plane of existance. There should be something more here. Everyone can see it, even ourselves. The risk is part of the challenge No one escapes that flaw. Thus, everything stops, all of the repetition ends The cycle must be broken. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 64 [informant] => ReachingZero [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
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