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Array ( [sid] => 50600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ??? [time] => 2004-06-06 00:30:13 [hometext] => I enjoy getting feedback [bodytext] => I'm so cold
It's so dark
I can't see you there

Is that really you
standing over me with
your flowing locks of hair

No, it isn't you
you're long gone away
leaving me here alone

You never liked me
no one else ever did either
each one threw a stone

Don't worry about me
I'll be gone soon enough
I won't bother you anymore

I wish you knew
I really loved you
my heart is still sore

You laughed and left
and now your gone
just like all the rest

What was I thinking
That you would stay?
I hoped for the best

I should have known
you would leave
laughing all the way

Here I am
but not for you
you have hell to pay

Here it is
my last goodbye
my final fond farewell

And thinking back
I have one thing to say
MAY YOU ALL BURN IN HELL!!!!! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => nohope [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

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Contributed by nohope on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 12:30:13 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm so cold
It's so dark
I can't see you there

Is that really you
standing over me with
your flowing locks of hair

No, it isn't you
you're long gone away
leaving me here alone

You never liked me
no one else ever did either
each one threw a stone

Don't worry about me
I'll be gone soon enough
I won't bother you anymore

I wish you knew
I really loved you
my heart is still sore

You laughed and left
and now your gone
just like all the rest

What was I thinking
That you would stay?
I hoped for the best

I should have known
you would leave
laughing all the way

Here I am
but not for you
you have hell to pay

Here it is
my last goodbye
my final fond farewell

And thinking back
I have one thing to say
MAY YOU ALL BURN IN HELL!!!!!

Copyright © nohope ... [ 2004-06-06 00:30:13]
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Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 01:22:28 AM AEST
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ive gone through this too but not this extreme. so i can understand most of what you are feeling right now. dont worry most of the world is going there anyway.

Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 03:35:59 AM AEST
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I liked this, good write and you said it all.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Sunday, 6th June 2004 @ 02:20:37 PM AEST
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Rejection burns your soul...But revenge kindles the fire!!!!! I love this poem.....get back at all the um.....bloody buggers....who put you down, said they loved you and left you...BRING EM ALL DOWN A PECK OR TWO!!!!

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