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Array ( [sid] => 5058 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I don’t want you anymore [time] => 2002-10-14 15:00:00 [hometext] => This is my first poem in English. I have to start somewhere, don't it? [bodytext] => I will have to face you someday,
Look you straight in the eye and say,
I wanted to tell you this before,
But I don’t want you anymore

All the loving memories,
Tender as a gentle breeze,
Bring back to me the pain,
Flowing freely through my veins.

You will finally appreciate me,
Adore me, worship, and consecrate me,
For everything that I’m worth,
When you get what you deserve.

Deserve me, you sure don’t do,
To your level I sure won’t stoop,
When I considered you more than a friend,
I would have taken it ‘til the end.

But you sure don’t get this ordeal.
You think what we have isn’t real,
As far as I’m concerned,
I don’t think you still have learned.

The pain you made me go through,
The suffering I endured because of you,
If some of it got back to your face,
It sure wouldn’t be misplaced.

But you’ll come crawling back,
And I won’t be there to help you stand,
‘Cause the respect for me that you lack
Calms down my shaking hands.

So when you see me once again,
And demand to be good friends,
Your arrogant words I will ignore,
I just don’t want you anymore. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Xenodata [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

I don’t want you anymore

Contributed by Xenodata on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I will have to face you someday,
Look you straight in the eye and say,
I wanted to tell you this before,
But I don’t want you anymore

All the loving memories,
Tender as a gentle breeze,
Bring back to me the pain,
Flowing freely through my veins.

You will finally appreciate me,
Adore me, worship, and consecrate me,
For everything that I’m worth,
When you get what you deserve.

Deserve me, you sure don’t do,
To your level I sure won’t stoop,
When I considered you more than a friend,
I would have taken it ‘til the end.

But you sure don’t get this ordeal.
You think what we have isn’t real,
As far as I’m concerned,
I don’t think you still have learned.

The pain you made me go through,
The suffering I endured because of you,
If some of it got back to your face,
It sure wouldn’t be misplaced.

But you’ll come crawling back,
And I won’t be there to help you stand,
‘Cause the respect for me that you lack
Calms down my shaking hands.

So when you see me once again,
And demand to be good friends,
Your arrogant words I will ignore,
I just don’t want you anymore.

Copyright Â© Xenodata ... [ 2002-10-14 15:00:00]
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Re: I don’t want you anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Suzy on Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 04:54:03 PM AEST
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wow what a start...this is awesome...

Lasca

Re: I don’t want you anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Twinky on Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:08:35 AM AEST
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this poem is really good, it makes me think of the way i see many guys treat there girls til the girl just cant take it anymore!!!!! i am gonna make my best friend read this poem cuz she is in a bad relationship and maybe this will help her realize that he isnt gonna change!!!

Re: I don’t want you anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Xenodata on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:24:00 PM AEST
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Thanks :)
I really appreciate the fact that you can relate my poem to a situation that is taking place around you. I was trying to write this while thinking of my gf at the time, now my ex (gee, I wonder why, hehehe). So I wasn't making anything up, I was just writing what I felt at the time.

Re: I don’t want you anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Xenodata on Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 01:25:28 PM AEST
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Thanks for you input. Your comments encourage me to attempt writing even more.

Re: I don’t want you anymore (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 01:00:22 PM AEST
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Wow, how dramatic and what pain can I feel from reading it. It brings saddness to my heart. It's truely deep and what a wonderful writing

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