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Array ( [sid] => 50555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2004-06-05 16:56:22 [hometext] => Please comment on this please [bodytext] => It feels like I remembered your beautiful face,
And it's like you were here but now your gone,
My eyes began to build up with tears,
As then come down my face,
But your not here to wipe them away,
I try all I can to not think about you,
But it's hard when you were the first person,
I have ever had feelings for,
You don't know how hard it is for me,
To be in so much pain,
And you don't even care,
I sit here and ask myself why,
Did I even put up with you,
I trusted you so much that I believed,
That you cared for me,
I guess I loved you too much,
And you pushed me to the side,
Why did you play with the emotion of me?,
You left me confused and stressed,
Leaving me to hurt more on the inside,
I really loved him,
And all this time he was using me,
Just to get to someone else,
I saw the hate in his eyes and it,
Hurt my soul and heart,
Then they both shattered into pieces,
And they washed away in the rain,
Making me feel like a fool,
What should I do when I'm crying at night,
And you ain't there to see me,
I just can't deal with the lies,
You see my tears and still,
You laugh in my face,
When it begins to rain again,
I run just to find you,
But now you have broken me once more
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Contributed by luckycharm on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:56:22 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



It feels like I remembered your beautiful face,
And it's like you were here but now your gone,
My eyes began to build up with tears,
As then come down my face,
But your not here to wipe them away,
I try all I can to not think about you,
But it's hard when you were the first person,
I have ever had feelings for,
You don't know how hard it is for me,
To be in so much pain,
And you don't even care,
I sit here and ask myself why,
Did I even put up with you,
I trusted you so much that I believed,
That you cared for me,
I guess I loved you too much,
And you pushed me to the side,
Why did you play with the emotion of me?,
You left me confused and stressed,
Leaving me to hurt more on the inside,
I really loved him,
And all this time he was using me,
Just to get to someone else,
I saw the hate in his eyes and it,
Hurt my soul and heart,
Then they both shattered into pieces,
And they washed away in the rain,
Making me feel like a fool,
What should I do when I'm crying at night,
And you ain't there to see me,
I just can't deal with the lies,
You see my tears and still,
You laugh in my face,
When it begins to rain again,
I run just to find you,
But now you have broken me once more




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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:14:55 PM AEST
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You sound stong in a situation of sad. Sad that people run like they do. I wish you better days And a new found peace. God bless you.


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 05:20:51 PM AEST
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hey,
well,i'm so sorry for this.that guy did no good to you and it's best to get over him.soon,another guy will come and he'll love you so much and your pure and innocent heart,trust me.that guy don't deserve not one of your tears.remember this,"what goes around,comes around",so he'll learn his lesson later on.don't give up on love,this will make you stronger.
love always,
Andrea


Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 10:03:22 PM AEST
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be strong. you can feel the pain of leaving him for good for some time. or you can prolong the pain such as this for as long as it will run. you will feel more pain this way. it is best to move on and try to forget. you can have so much better than that.




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