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I wonder if I should die
Life has gotten the best of me
It has taken my soul
And taken my bestfriend

I think i'm ready to give up
Then i hear that sound
You come on-line
Then as quick as you came
You are gone
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all alone

Contributed by rugby_player on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:36:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I sit in the dark and cry
I wonder if I should die
Life has gotten the best of me
It has taken my soul
And taken my bestfriend

I think i'm ready to give up
Then i hear that sound
You come on-line
Then as quick as you came
You are gone
Alone again

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Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:49:23 AM AEST
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Very sad even tho it' written well.
Hang in there.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:13:09 AM AEST
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I think we all feel alone sometimes... great poem!

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 03:11:39 AM AEST
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great write...keep it up keep it coming...I loev it...
read and comment my stuff I'd love to hear what you think, if you want
Dani

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:29:11 AM AEST
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I feel like this alot, ...alone, you are not alone in feeling like this, very good write, you expressed it well,.

takecare

Pixie xx

Re: all alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 12:10:45 PM AEST
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Rugby hmm isn't that a team sport and yet this poem is not reflective of the name you have chosen for your self, loneliness is felt by all, how you use it shows whether you are growing from it or if it is consuming you. I hope your pain is being formed into something that will help others to overcome theirs. I think it can be. --Archie

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