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Array ( [sid] => 50471 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time To Go [time] => 2004-06-04 23:26:09 [hometext] => I wrote this when I was thirteen years old and struggling with depression. I didn't know what the purpose of life was or why God kept me on this earth if I wasn't happy. [bodytext] => Could you give me a warning
Or even a clue
God when are you sending me up to you
Will an angel come down from Heaven above
To take me from the ones that I dearly love
Can I say goodbye one last time
And tell them I will be just fine
I will tell them that I am in good hands
For you are the one that makes the commands
I promise to come to Heaven and pray
Just please send me the right way
My family has been there through thick and thin
Please don't make them suffer for they have no sin
Oh God, you have always been there for my family and I
You held us in your hands when we had a good cry
I guess now is the time for me to finally go
I will be with you always...in the softly falling snow [comments] => 2 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 52 [informant] => Seans_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Time To Go

Contributed by Seans_Girl on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:26:09 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Could you give me a warning
Or even a clue
God when are you sending me up to you
Will an angel come down from Heaven above
To take me from the ones that I dearly love
Can I say goodbye one last time
And tell them I will be just fine
I will tell them that I am in good hands
For you are the one that makes the commands
I promise to come to Heaven and pray
Just please send me the right way
My family has been there through thick and thin
Please don't make them suffer for they have no sin
Oh God, you have always been there for my family and I
You held us in your hands when we had a good cry
I guess now is the time for me to finally go
I will be with you always...in the softly falling snow

Copyright © Seans_Girl ... [ 2004-06-04 23:26:09]
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Re: Time To Go (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 11:44:51 PM AEST
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Hi Sean's_girl,
this is a very inteligent write for a 13 year old.
Impressive.
Luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Time To Go (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 09:32:35 AM AEST
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wow, this is a very good write for someone who was 13, 5/5 you are far beyond your years in your writing

pixie xx

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