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A Grain of Salt in Grains of Sand
Contributed by
InexactExactness
on
Monday, 14th October 2002 @ 08:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The difficulties enlighten me
and make me whole again
The suffering enrages me
and burns my soul again
Where were you when this happened
when all of it happened to me
Were you shedding tears of joy
for all the world to see
The content of your lies
and the filth of your desires
The fake platter of growing pain
within me burns a fire
Desperate for want
and wanting all attention
Hate is what you'll get
to make up for your pension
This grain of salt in grains of sand
that stands out on it's own
The distance only tires me
the strength it only grows
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InexactExactness
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2002-10-14 08:15:00]
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Re: A Grain of Salt in Grains of Sand
(User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 09:02:52 AM AEST
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This write feels very lonely Gus,
Lonely but strong in will! I like it as I recognise it from time to time!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: A Grain of Salt in Grains of Sand
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by OreO on
Friday, 27th December 2002 @ 11:49:45 PM AEST
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I must say that from the title of this poem i really thought it was going to go a different way but when i read it i got this cold dark feeling....and the chillbumps that covered me when i read it were completely out of control...this one captured me deeply....and there are so many emotions in this poem yet strength and inspiration to? Who do i know that can put all that in a poem.......only you my friend....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.
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