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Array ( [sid] => 50376 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing Left 2 [time] => 2004-06-04 09:58:53 [hometext] => this is the second part to Nothing Lleft [bodytext] => Don’t let me go forward
NO!
I don’t want to hear what she has to say
To say to my dad
Those horrible words
“I want a divorce”
The glass falls to the floor
My sister asks
We cry and want to know why
What is happening?
“Nothing go back to bed girls”
My dad yells
Fear in his voice
They go away
Through the window we listen
Where are we to go?
What is going to happen to everything they have together
Skip the rest to awful
The day I wished
To be outside with my dad
The day the police came to take him away
He only wanted to say good night
Please let him in
All I want is a hug
My face pressed against the window cold glass
Tears stain my face
I scream
They try to calm me down
Give me a hug
GO AWAY!
I don’t want you hug
I want the hug of my father
He goes away mom comes home
I hate her
The day it was official
I woke up
Knowing today was the day
Ii ran so fast
Sisters collided in their fathers arms
We fall
Knees hit the ground
Nobody interrupt
We all know the end is so near
The family that was once is gone
Like a wisper in the wind
We cry
Tears stain the ground with out pain
Please god make them get back together
Never to be
Never to happen again
Four years go by
I have lost him
My best friend
I waited
9 months
He came back
Came away from his cell
But too different
Not the same sweet boy I knew
In my living room
The cops cuff him and tell him he is to come with them
He might not have done it
This is the last time
Ego away I don’t want to do this number again
Everything gets dark
But then a faint light shines through
I am happy for weeks
More than in a long time
But my choice
A selfish one
Hits three times
The third time is the end
Please go back again
Stop where I am happy
In his arms
That Valentines Day
Telling him I love him
Stop there that’s where I want to stay
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Nothing Left 2

Contributed by adanawa on Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 09:58:53 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Don’t let me go forward
NO!
I don’t want to hear what she has to say
To say to my dad
Those horrible words
“I want a divorce”
The glass falls to the floor
My sister asks
We cry and want to know why
What is happening?
“Nothing go back to bed girls”
My dad yells
Fear in his voice
They go away
Through the window we listen
Where are we to go?
What is going to happen to everything they have together
Skip the rest to awful
The day I wished
To be outside with my dad
The day the police came to take him away
He only wanted to say good night
Please let him in
All I want is a hug
My face pressed against the window cold glass
Tears stain my face
I scream
They try to calm me down
Give me a hug
GO AWAY!
I don’t want you hug
I want the hug of my father
He goes away mom comes home
I hate her
The day it was official
I woke up
Knowing today was the day
Ii ran so fast
Sisters collided in their fathers arms
We fall
Knees hit the ground
Nobody interrupt
We all know the end is so near
The family that was once is gone
Like a wisper in the wind
We cry
Tears stain the ground with out pain
Please god make them get back together
Never to be
Never to happen again
Four years go by
I have lost him
My best friend
I waited
9 months
He came back
Came away from his cell
But too different
Not the same sweet boy I knew
In my living room
The cops cuff him and tell him he is to come with them
He might not have done it
This is the last time
Ego away I don’t want to do this number again
Everything gets dark
But then a faint light shines through
I am happy for weeks
More than in a long time
But my choice
A selfish one
Hits three times
The third time is the end
Please go back again
Stop where I am happy
In his arms
That Valentines Day
Telling him I love him
Stop there that’s where I want to stay




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Re: Nothing Left 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:57:50 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a very long poem, I did not finish it though, I saw the words divorced in it, and my parents divorced when I was very young, sometimes I wonder what would of happened if they stayed together, but people never know, heh.




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